Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Kenny,
Well composed ballad!
Good balance of instrumentals and vocals.
I liked this part:
"Here in the city of angels
There’s so many broken hearts
Lost souls are out there
Sleepwalking down the boulevard"

The vocal "ooohs" was a nice addition, but if you are up for suggestions, I think they end a little sharp, maybe small reverb tail would smooth endings?

Thank you for sharing!
Misha.


Hey Misha,

Thank you for the listen and kind words,

I don't ever mind hearing a critique from someone, I listened again with my

focus on the oohs and heard them cut off a little abruptly in one place, so

it probably happens more than that in the song. It's always better to have

a second set of ears on something. I wasn't paying a lot of attention to them,

what I hear is all the vocal parts that could be better. I don't like doing vocal

punch-ins if I can help it. I decided that the emotional feel captured was worth

keeping. Anyway, thanks for the input.