Originally Posted By: 44kfl


Thanks Jim,

I don't know if you're putting me on because you are a very good songwriter.

We all approach it a little differently I guess.

My first answer would be, I wrote it that way because I like the sound of it

and it's not like a thousand other writers would say it.

My second answer is accents in melody,

anyone can SEE
way you MOVE
theres no CHANCE
belong to a MAN

plus the bonus of using the old "win your hand" to make

an internal rhyme with man

hopes this is a decent answer to your question

I wasn't trying to put you on, so I hope you are not offended...
As a good songwriter I knew you had your reasons...
But without asking I would only be guessing...
I think it would be cool if other songwriters I've admired through the years were members here
So I could ask them about their creative choices for both lyrics & chord progressions...
Thanks for you speedy reply!

Jim
†=☮&♥