Originally Posted By: Birchwood
There is a message in it, but that's the problem with most of my songs. It's a habit, I'm afraid.

And that's a problem, how? wink

So long as it doesn't feel like the song is trying to get that point across in the least subtle way possible, that's no problem at all.

As someone else mentioned, it's got a sort of John Lennon vibe. Partly because of the subject, partly because you really do sound a bit like him, and partly because of the effects on the voice. (John apparently didn't like the sound of his voice, so was always looking for some way to disguise his voice).

The mandolin helps give the song a distinct sound, I like it.

Plus, you made me look up the word evanescent.

Well done! laugh

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?