Hi Torrey, Ray and Dave,

Dave, thanks for listening again and your final conclusion.

Torrey, From John Lennon to Al Steward... I'm getting confused but also honored with these comparisons and I like cats! so thanks a lot.

And Ray, I like the way you started your post. It's a very nice line. One I can use in another song. But the following two lines were also very instructive. I think you're right about the first one, and I'm still hesitating about the second one. I tried singing softer at the beginning, but then one can easely mis what the line is about (ok, they can read the lyrics, but still...)
And the lines following made me shine. But Loosing is also the opposite of winning or gaining succes. Like in 'looser'. There is a president who's using this very much in his tweets.

But thank you all and have a very nice weekend,
Hans Lennon-Steward

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130