Hi Hugh,

You made an interesting and daring song. Interesting for where the lyrics came from and daring for the special way it was sung.
I can follow your reason for not using percussion. That electric guitar makes the tempo and has a nice, dominant imput.
I heard parts in the song that made me wonder why this wasn't sung in a 'normal'way. The voice was good enough and has a good reach.

I can not say I like it, because of the vocals, but I've enjoyed it (as you hoped).
Using Nectar 2 can be the cause...

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130