This is good.
A fun write. Your rapping is good - reminds me of some of Ed Sheeran's kind of rapping. A lot of words to get across and you did a good job of that.
Good job of combining all those instrument. A coherent sound. And a very good mix. I thought the sax seemed a little out of place against the other instruments, but that is a producer choice, of course...
Really well done. I like it.
fj
Thanks Floyd for your kind and positive feedback

Very nice to hear Ed mentioned in the context of my song

Yes, I think the sax volume changes quite much so maybe that causes it to be out of place from time to time.
Janne