I'm a beginner songwriter and have just finished my first (ever) song. I got a lot to learn so any thoughts would be really appreciated.

Love, Rinse, Repeat
©2020 JohnMAFS

Verse 1

Is it sad
She holds her hand
Closes her eyes
And pretends it’s a mans

And is it bad
Her life’s so bland
Without the touch
Of a womaniser

People say, “girl don’t you cry
Find another, and you’ll be just fine”
Surprise, surprise
Her hearts’ out to dry
And she’s back on the horse
For another ride

I’ve seen it all before,
She goes slammin’ doors
And then opens ones
That are barely ajar

Chorus

Come on girl, can’t you see?
Love to you’s just rinse and repeat
You’re so locked up
If you want to be freed
Stop playin’ these games of love, rinse, repeat

Verse 2

It’s so sad
When one love ends
She can barely stand
‘Til a new one begins

And it’s so bad
After all these tears
She’s forgotten the boys
From the early years

She treats love like a fool
A game of filling shoes
Yet she asks “why oh why
Is my life so cruel?”

Chorus

Come on girl, can’t you see?
Love to you’s just rinse and repeat
You’re so locked up
If you want to be freed
Stop playin’ these games of love, rinse, repeat
You’re so locked up
If you want to be freed
Stop playin’ these games of love, rinse, repeat
Stop playin’ these games of love, rinse, repeat