The vocal has an odd halo around it...probably the room you recorded in - or some proximity effect.
The actual vocal is well done but needs to sit in the mix rather than sounding like it was placed on top.
Did you use the reverbs automatically applied to the individual tracks in BIAB? it may be a mismatch between that and you voice treatment that make the distance/difference.
Apart from that - nice song, nicely done.


Cheers
rayc
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