Nicely done! I thought the chord changes did a good job supporting the lyric, and the enjoyed the lyrics.

I'd use "in" in this line:

I begged you to come home but it was in vain.

despite what the dictionary says. wink

Glad you managed to translate this!


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?