Yep! I agree with the "not the finished article" thought. Especially the sung part, yes, that could be a solo - I was going to put a piccolo to play that section, high above the rest, but ... I've had the longest day in the world and, in short, I was too lazy to spend an extra while in creating the piccolo part, mixing it, etc. etc. . See what happens if one is lazy? Other musicians notice ...

I'm out of practice in writing, etc., but that's how one gets back INTO practice ... by writing, no other way. So thanks for listening and for your perceptive comments!!! I'm not sure how much time I have to dedicate to writing and polishing songs of late, so I'm not sure if it'd be fair to ask someone else if they'd be interesting in working with me on this ... but, if my schedule frees up a little, why not? :-) Again, thanks!

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