Strong opening. Vocals are a bit further back in the mix than I'd like.

Interesting break - not what I expected.

Catchy chorus, nice build at the end. Subtle harmonies.

I'm curious what the line does the twilight still gleam? means. Are you asking if there's still light before the night falls? (I'm probably overthinking the lyric).

I enjoyed it! laugh


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?