OK, I found some things and fixed them.

If I just give you the song back, you won't see what I did. So do this:


Add the roots to all these chords (except the last few that don't use them). For example, the first chord is not Cm7. It's Cm7/F and you enter the /root. The root on many chords gives the tension your song was missing.

Here's the one absolute mistake: your chart is wrong on bar 4 (and 8). Your chart says BMaj7/F but it's actually BbMaj7/F Big time mistake in the sound.

You didn't put the b9 in bar 10. You had C13 but it's C13b9

Bar 13 is not enterable in BIAB, so I suggest Dbm9/C

I suggest a part marker at measure 17

If you want to use a Tag, change the bar numbers above the chordsheet from 1-29 to 1-20

Then start the Tag after bar 19 and go to 21

Finally, set the key signature to Bb but use NO Transpose

Then set the key signature to Ab and DO use Transpose

Then Options, Preferences, Notation and select Tenor Sax in the Transpose pull-down.

Send me the song when you're done and I'll see how you did.

BIAB 2024 Win Audiophile. Software: Studio One 6.5 Pro, Swam horns, Acoustica-7, Notion 6; Win 11 Home. Hardware: Intel i9, 32 Gb; Roland Integra-7, Presonus Studio 192, Presonus Faderport 8, Royer 121, Adam Sub8 & Neumann 120 monitors