Hi Alf-L,

I turned down the volume knob, did my earphones half from my ears and was prepared for the worst to come!
But then; the first link didn't work anymore and the second one made me undo all my preparations. I had to turn up the volume and place the earphones correctly on my ears and... nothing worse happened! I heard a very nice song, good vocals singing ordinary lyrics (kind of...).
So a good song Alf, contrary to your warnings!

I only have one or two things you need to change: that big guitar note at the start, and the single note from the sax somewhere at the beginning. No, I am teasing a bit. The only thing you need to remember from my post is that you made a very enjoyable song!

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130