Hi Jptjptjpt,

Like Marty said, if I will cross through Jacksonville i will certainly stop. Not only for the song, but also the drinks on your account. I think Marty meant that as well.
A pitty though, the road to your place is very long...

I liked the idea you were singing in your car I once said to you. But the recording in your basement is even brighter. Very well done!
Your lyrics are very nice and tell something about that city. That's nice.
There is one 'but' though: You sing a bit sadly and also slightly monotonous. Not the sparkling tuones I was expecting for this song with this message. It feels you have lost something or -one and not celebrating it is you living in Jacksonville.
Oh... I also think it maybe is time to upgrade to BiaB X (where X stands for every version higher than 2012). The sound of the piano will then be much better, I bet.

Enjoyed your song and nice video,
Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
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