Hello Rob ...
What a great song! Loved the video, too.
At the 1:34 - 1:37, then again at 2:04 - 2:06, the music was a wee bit piercing. Maybe if you cut back on the upper mid frequency a bit, or dropped the volume a touch, it would allow the richness of the note to better define itself. Just a thought FWIW.
All that said, it's a really great song and you have the perfect voice for it! Very niuce, indeed!
Best to you ...
Alan