Originally Posted By: MarioD
Ray and Janice, this is an excellent song
Great vocal, as usual
Outstanding chord progression
Great use of RTs
Outstanding mix

Two thumbs up


Thank you Mario!

Janice


Originally Posted By: RnAM
Originally Posted By: rayc

This is a mastered version but any/all suggestions/comments are welcome and will be used on the next project.


OK. Since you're asking. I may have a few pointers that would improve the mix, the lyrics, and the vocals (and make the song do better at the box office).

At first, I would change all of the following:


Just kidding laugh


This sounds cool! It's the perfect marriage of your 60s/70s-inspired Syd Barrett/Procol Harum/Donovan/Beatle-Esque sound with Janice's strong signature vocals.

An innovative combination that calls out for more. Well done guys!

Rob


Thanks Rob. I'm happy you like it. It was definitely an adventure for me smile

Janice