Brad, in my humble opinion you nailed this, especially lyrically. Fully enjoyed it man.
I could easily see Johnny Cash singing this back in the day.
Just 1 small nit, you have a great voice, growl when appropriate, don't hold back.

They said, ‘Be slow to anger son, but prepare to fight.

This song is about pluck, grit and testosterone; belt it out baby smile


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For me there’s no better place in the band than to have one leg in the harmony world and the other in the percussive. Thank you Paul Tutmarc and Leo Fender.