Thanks all for the positive responses. It was a lot of fun, and a great song.
I'd like to thank Brad for being open to letting me play around with his song. It takes a level of trust to let someone rearrange your song, and honestly, I'm certainly not as open to suggestions on my own songs as he was.
There's probably a lesson there for me to learn here, if only I could figure out what it is.

This song would be better served by an even leaner arrangement - I'm yet to learn how not to overstuff an arrangement.
And I was also a bit heavy-handed with the pitch correction at times, so thanks for being kind about that. The best option is always to re-record, but I wanted to see how far I could go with just editing the vocal.
Thanks again to Brad, and everyone who's commented.
