Originally Posted By: rayc
That is a very cool result.
Interesting progression and melody.
Three things struck me -
a) there's a lot of what feels like ping-ponging, but is just the timing, of keyboard chords across the stereo image. That could be addressed in a variety of ways.
b) the ending is more than abrupt - an easy fix &
c) the vocal is fine in most respects but could do with a little EQ nudging. I'd suggest using the JSFX Spectrum Matcher to find a vocal that can be used to fill out your own.Or have a look at your own vocal's EQ and try booting the low level spots & reducing the high level ones.
GOOD work & well collaborated.

Hey Ray, thanks for your review. This was a fun collab.
I have to say I don't understand your a) and c) but I agree with your b).

We are aware of the abrupt ending but our tight schedule precluded us from fixing that.

As for the progression and melody, Mr. Dylan is due that credit.

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