A bit whiny cry, but this is pretty cool stuff, excellent and very intense and emotional vocal performance smile

My only minor nit is that in the first verse you resolve the chord progression on "breath" and "sleeve" which removes the tension a bit too early. I would leave that open for more drama.


Making bits and bytes sound good...

Goldmania Bella - A One-Man Girlband with no fans
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