Originally Posted By: tommyad
Ray, it looks like you watched what we all watched. I enjoyed the unique chord structure and look forward to hearing your vocal deliver those interesting lyrics. The use of dissonance works well and reminds me a bit of Jimmy Page. Well done so far, Tom

Thanks Tommy,
dissonance is a cool thing in the right hands.
Vocal draft in the O.P.


Cheers
rayc
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