Hi Elliott,

Great song and very catchy verses and chorus. Also - excellent production and good vocals.

I thought the lyrics and phrasing were good - you could maybe consider dropping the word "beautiful" in the chorus and sing e.g. "it's such a night" or "what a night".

Just a minor comment - I really enjoyed the whole song.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com