I think the compression on the vocals is okay, the highs are a bit too strong and make them sound thin compared to your normal vocals.
But, to be honest, I don't care, because:
... don't give up on making your music!
No matter how good or bad you are, you create something that wasn't there before and would never have been there without you.
Thank you, Torrey, for this song. And the same goes for you: keep singing your song!