Hi Doony ...

Welcome to the forum! Good to have you with us.

Loved it! I write a lot of music in this and similar genres (smooth jazz, r and b, soft rock, pop country).

Everything fits nicely in the mix - all tracks have their space and are distinct. I really do think it's a great song.

Two things caught my ear that might warrant another look:

1. Just a bit more higher EQ on the drums might give them some additional "color".
2. The ending was abrupt - as though you stopped it at the end of a verse, with another to follow that wasn't included.

All that said, there's a lot to like in the composition. I enjoyed it!

Wishing you the best,

Alan

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