When I read "thou" I think "must be old"

Hi, B.D.
You're not wrong!

That's beautiful. And I applaud your decision to use your own melody, because it's the best element of the song.
Thanks! I was a bit worried that it sounded it a bit more like a harmony part than a melody, but it grew on me, so I stopped worrying.
I'm also a sucker for reverb, so I have absolutely no complaints about that.
The bass could have a few dB more, but apart from that the mix is not bad at all.
I may just do that. Or re-do the bass a bit, since it could do with a
touch more activity.
Enjoyed the listen.
A lot!
Thanks!
