Hi Torrey,

Like all the songs I've heard from you, the choruses are always your strong parts.
They sound very catchy. This song is no different.
The lyrics are a bit long, but you have a lot to sing about, that's true.
I'm a bit worried what you wrote about your vocal problems. I hope I misunderstood, because there is nothing wrong with what I heard.
Very nice song!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130