Hi Mick!

I love that melody you have going on here. I agree with a lot of what Dave has already suggested. However I think you could keep the same instrument lead if the song was cut in half time wise. I love that sound!

I do agree with him on that kick, way too loud and I didn’t feel that sound fit the song.

You have the makings of a winner instrumental here!


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