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#235235 - 01/15/14 04:08 PM [User Showcase] Come On Over Here - Di Singing
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WARNING...This song is so cheesy it's pathetic! We decided to write a song from the early 60's era in the cheesy Pop-Rock that was so prevalent at that time. The music ain't that bad but the lyric says Pepperjack, Swiss, Cheddar, Asiago....any kind of cheese you can think of! But, we had a really good time doing it. Sometimes the muse smacks you in the face and she won't be denied! We hope you like it anyway!!!! And thanks in advance.

File:Di - Come On Over Here.MGU
Key=Eb , Tempo 126, Length (m:s)=3:46
4 bar intro, 112 bar chorus, from bar 5 to bar 116. Repeat x1 chorus
Melody has 696 notes, Melody harmony is < no harmony >(0)
Soloist track has 1092 notes, Soloist harmony is < no harmony >(0)
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,

Style MIDI Instruments are : Finger Electric Bass (34), Acoustic Piano (1), Muted Electric Guit (29),
RealTracks in song: 1842:Synth Pad, PopModernGrooveA-B Ev16 075
RealTracks in song: 1441:Sax, Alto, Soloist JazzFunkGroovin Ev16 110
RealDrums in style: CountryEven8: a: Brushes, HiHat b: Snare, Ride


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Come On Over Here
© 2012 Alan D. David, BMI / Diana Randall, BMI

Come On Over Here

(v1)
I see you looking at me every day
But you never have nothin’ to say
To tell the truth I’ve been hoping you might say hello
Cuz I’ve been sneaking a peek or two
I’ve been watching everything you do
I think you’re a guy I’d really like to get to know

CHORUS

Hey Baby, come on over here
I don’t bit but I might nibble on your ear
Don’t be nervous, don’t be shy
I think it’s time at last we say Hi
Yeah Baby, come on over here
Don’t be afraid, you got nothin’ to fear
‘Cept I might kiss you all over your face
Or maybe even a tight embrace

INSTRUMENTAL VERSE

(v2)
Don’t be shy, tell me what you think
And if you want, you can give me a wink
If you can’t tell I like the way you’ve been looking at me
You’re really cute and you’re sexy, too
Somehow I feel you would always be true
Don’t be so timid, go on and set your feelings free

CHORUS

INSTRUMENTAL VERSE

CHORUS

OUT
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#235244 - 01/15/14 04:25 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Very nice sounding song. The both of you are really starting to shine.


DA...


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#235307 - 01/15/14 08:33 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Hi Di and Al,

cheesy or not: it's fun.
And a great voice.
Nice mix.

Guenter
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#235324 - 01/15/14 09:38 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Alan and Di...

Pathetic...NOT!!!! Cheesy... No Siree!!! This is a terrific piece.

You captured the style perfectly. The lyric is EXCELLENT. This type of song is not about clever phrases tightly crafted to dazzle the intellect. It's all about how the words sound - how they fall on the ear - and do they make sense as they fall... This does that perfectly. Not a single word out of place. A simple message without sounding contrived. This is NOT easy to do. These words SING.

Di's vocal is a delight. Comfortable. Convincing. Like it wasn't a song, but something she actually felt like saying...

The instrumentation is terrific. The sax fits perfectly. The mix is as good as everything else in the song....

My fav "Al & Di"...

floyd
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#235432 - 01/16/14 09:25 AM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Well, I like the song, okay, it's fun. But, since you mentioned lyrics, oh boy, I sure hope I'm not out of line here....

In the chorus, you might try a minor edit and changing the order of the lines in the second half? Just a suggestion, okay.

Hey Baby, come on over here
I don’t bite but I might nibble your ear
Don’t be nervous, don’t be shy
I think it’s time that we say Hi

Or maybe even tightly embrace
‘Cept I might kiss you all over your face
Don’t be afraid, you got nothin’ to fear
Yeah Baby, come on over here




Edited by olemon (01/16/14 03:21 PM)
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#235447 - 01/16/14 10:38 AM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Oh yeah. That's a fun listen. The vocal is so relaxed. It is a perfect delivery for the song. Really well written. I would tweak a couple of things in the mix. I thought the muted guitar was too loud and the sax not loud enough. I also thought the ending should be different. I struggle a lot with endings myself. Don't let my nitpicking comments detract from a great track. Keep em coming. Tom

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#235467 - 01/16/14 02:24 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Well done. Loved the song. Well sung and played. Sax was a nice touch
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#235472 - 01/16/14 02:35 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Loved it! Very cool retro vibe on this one. Great work.

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#235473 - 01/16/14 02:40 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Hi Alan and Di
I have been away so haven't had a chance to listen to your stuff as yet. What a nice surprise. Great song. Great vocal. Great mix. Looking forward to more.

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#235482 - 01/16/14 04:00 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Digital Angel]
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Hi DA...

Thank you so much for your comments. Glad you enjoyed it!

Al & Di
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#235483 - 01/16/14 04:00 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: boehm]
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Hi Guenter

We're delighted you liked this one. it was supposed to be fun. I guess we succeeded...thanks!

Al & Di
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#235484 - 01/16/14 04:02 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: floyd jane]
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Hi Floyd...

Thank you so very much for those encouraging and wonderful comments. Now, we;re going to have to exceeded our budget for the month...those bigger hats are expensive!

Seriously, we really appreciate those kind words. We hold your opinion in high regard. We are humbled!

Al & Di
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#235485 - 01/16/14 04:05 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: olemon]
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Hi Bob...

No comment is out of line as long as it's respectful...and everyone here always is. We appreciate the input. We're both closing in on 70 years old but still willing and wanting to learn as much as possible.

We liked your suggestion for reversing those two couplets...it's so obvious. Thanks for pointing that out to us. It just went right by us...thanks again!

Al & Di
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#235486 - 01/16/14 04:07 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: tommyad]
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Hi Tom...

So glad you enjoyed your listen. Although we're happy with the sax, we definitely agree with you on the muted guitar (right channel). If we redo this pone...which is quite likely...we will address that, maybe even turn the sax up a touch! We always appreciate constructive suggestion like this! Thanks again....

Al & Di
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#235487 - 01/16/14 04:07 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Scott C]
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Ho Scott...

Thanks for the listen and very nice review. We appreciate the positive feedback! Best to you...

Al & Di
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#235488 - 01/16/14 04:09 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: rsdean]
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Hi Bob (resdean)...

Thank you for the listen and for your kind words. We appreciate that great feedback. Wishing you well...

Al & Di
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#235489 - 01/16/14 04:10 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: JoanneCooper]
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Hi Josie...

Glad to have you listening in on our music!!!

We're delighted you enjoyed it and we sure do appreciate you letting us know. There will be more! Best to you...

Al & Di
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#235523 - 01/16/14 07:32 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Hi, Al & Di !:))


It is easy to join in with all the other
comments !:)) I enjoyed this tune really
very much and Di´s voice is absolutely the right
one for this song !:)) Thumbs up !:))


Cheers
Dani

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#235539 - 01/16/14 10:04 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: dani48]
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Ditto for the others, nice tune, great vocal and delivery. OK by me!
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#235555 - 01/16/14 11:30 PM [User Showcase] Re: Come On Over Here - Di Singing [Re: Al-David]
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Al & Di,

I really like that retro vibe too. Fun and flirty. Nice sax and arrangement. My foot was tapping. And Di, you had me with that vocal. Loved it. The ending was a bit rough but the more ya'll use BIAB/RB you'll get those smoothed out and it certainly didn't diminish me enjoying the song.

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