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#248352 - 04/28/14 07:12 PM [User Showcase] Gone Are Those Golden Days
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dani48 Offline
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Hi, friends !

The "machine" has been working
though I had a break for a
barbershop workshop weekend
in between !:)) It is little ol´me
going backwards again:

The Link: http://app.box.com/s/r9p39f96ic3mcdciqjsm

Style: JFFIERY.STY (jazzfunkbreezy w fiery drums (75 RS))
Instros:

Bass 1636
Piano 1639
Drums JFF4 - SSTKHH Snr RD
Guitar 1637
Strings 1638

Lyrics:

GONE ARE THOSE GOLDEN DAYS (by Dani)

I´d love to travel back in time
to those times that were so good to us
but gone are those golden days
they cannot be retrieved anymore

My only option left
is to dream myself away

Crying myself to sleep
is the only way to see you dear
gone are those golden days
of love and tender days of yore
days that will not come no more
days of song and rhyming lore

Oh, my love I miss you so
Is there no way you´d return to me
gone are those golden days
please, find a way back again

My only option left
is to dream myself away

Brown eyes, chestnut hair
no one else can miss you more than I
wonderful a smile and features so fair
in my dreams I still can see

I´d love to travel back in time
to those times that were so good to us
but gone are those golden days
days of love so true
days of loving you
only you

© Dani Lindroos 2014


Edited by dani48 (04/29/14 04:53 AM)

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#248355 - 04/28/14 07:18 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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Scott C Offline
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Nice job Dani. Loved the lyrics. Sure pulled at the heart strings.

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#248407 - 04/29/14 10:47 AM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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Hi Dani,

nice chord changes and good singing.
The drum breaks distracted me a little.

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#248448 - 04/29/14 11:19 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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Very nicely done! Like the laid back feel, fits the lyrics perfect. Thanks for sharing!
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#248484 - 04/30/14 09:14 AM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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Dani,

Very good mix on this. I had some difficulty following the structure of the song - thought there could have been a little more change in feel between parts... but perhaps that would not be what you wanted to accomplish...

The drums breaks certainly were interesting! I don't think I've heard anyone else do that! Cool idea.

floyd

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#248535 - 05/01/14 01:19 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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That one'll rip the paint right off of your heart. Sad but full of genuine emotion. Thanks for the chance to listen.

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#248565 - 05/01/14 09:16 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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Well my friend, you produced another fine tune. interesting drums breaks, I almost venture to say that they are from two different drums RD's ( I might be wrong), but never the less, it worked fine. Thanks for sharing.

Mike B.


Edited by cubanpete (05/01/14 09:24 PM)
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#248576 - 05/02/14 12:36 AM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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I enjoyed your song. It is well written and I certainly agree with Janice & Bud that you write very genuine and emotional lyrics. Your soft vocals work well with your musical choices. For me, this song portrays your emotional attachment to your happier times in the past, your present day longing to have those feelings of happiness again and the aching heart that so misses the one that has gone. That is a lot of directions to take the listener on in a 3 minute song but you did a good job with accomplishing it. Good job.
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#248593 - 05/02/14 09:14 AM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: Scott C]
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Hi, Scott !

...and thank you so much for
your most kind comments !:))
I miss my wife, I still do !!

Cheers
Dani

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#248611 - 05/02/14 01:33 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: boehm]
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Hi, Guenter !:))


Thank you so much for your
most kind comments ! The drum
breaks yeah, I felt I had to
try out something different (lol)!!

Cheers
Dani

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#248612 - 05/02/14 01:34 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: PgFantastic]
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dani48 Offline
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Hi, Robert !

I´m so glad your kind
comments ! :))


Cheers
Dani

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#248613 - 05/02/14 01:37 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: floyd jane]
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Hi, Floyd !

Thank you for your most kind
comments. I think you are right
with your suggestions too !
The drum breaks ! Felt I had
to come up with something odd.
Cool that you liked it !:))


Cheers
Dani

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#248614 - 05/02/14 01:40 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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dani48 Offline
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Hi, Janice & Bud !


I feel humbled by your
most kind comments, but you
are right, the lyrics come
right out of my heart as I
still do and will probably always
miss my dear late wife so much !:))


Cheers
Dani

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#248615 - 05/02/14 01:42 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: cubanpete]
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Hi, Mike !:))

Thanks for your most kind
comments ! You know you are
right about the RD:s they really
are two different styles !!:))
You are a most keen listener (chuckle) !:))

Cheers
Dani

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#248625 - 05/02/14 05:12 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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Dani, Nice drum breaks. Your chord progressions are always interesting. Nicely done. Tom

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#248627 - 05/02/14 05:26 PM [User Showcase] Re: Gone Are Those Golden Days [Re: dani48]
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Hi Dani. Lovely voice, feeling and intimate sound. Enjoyed the percussion.
Also had a few years with the barbershoppers. How about doing a song about them? Cheers.
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