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Hi, friends ! The "machine" has been working though I had a break for a barbershop workshop weekend in between !:)) It is little ol´me going backwards again: The Link: http://app.box.com/s/r9p39f96ic3mcdciqjsmStyle: JFFIERY.STY (jazzfunkbreezy w fiery drums (75 RS)) Instros: Bass 1636 Piano 1639 Drums JFF4 - SSTKHH Snr RD Guitar 1637 Strings 1638 Lyrics: GONE ARE THOSE GOLDEN DAYS (by Dani) I´d love to travel back in time to those times that were so good to us but gone are those golden days they cannot be retrieved anymore My only option left is to dream myself away Crying myself to sleep is the only way to see you dear gone are those golden days of love and tender days of yore days that will not come no more days of song and rhyming lore Oh, my love I miss you so Is there no way you´d return to me gone are those golden days please, find a way back again My only option left is to dream myself away Brown eyes, chestnut hair no one else can miss you more than I wonderful a smile and features so fair in my dreams I still can see I´d love to travel back in time to those times that were so good to us but gone are those golden days days of love so true days of loving you only you © Dani Lindroos 2014
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Nice job Dani. Loved the lyrics. Sure pulled at the heart strings.
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Hi Dani,
nice chord changes and good singing.
The drum breaks distracted me a little.
Guenter
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Very nicely done! Like the laid back feel, fits the lyrics perfect. Thanks for sharing!
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Dani,
Very good mix on this. I had some difficulty following the structure of the song - thought there could have been a little more change in feel between parts... but perhaps that would not be what you wanted to accomplish...
The drums breaks certainly were interesting! I don't think I've heard anyone else do that! Cool idea.
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That one'll rip the paint right off of your heart. Sad but full of genuine emotion. Thanks for the chance to listen.
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Well my friend, you produced another fine tune. interesting drums breaks, I almost venture to say that they are from two different drums RD's ( I might be wrong), but never the less, it worked fine. Thanks for sharing.
Mike B.
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I enjoyed your song. It is well written and I certainly agree with Janice & Bud that you write very genuine and emotional lyrics. Your soft vocals work well with your musical choices. For me, this song portrays your emotional attachment to your happier times in the past, your present day longing to have those feelings of happiness again and the aching heart that so misses the one that has gone. That is a lot of directions to take the listener on in a 3 minute song but you did a good job with accomplishing it. Good job.
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Hi, Scott !
...and thank you so much for
your most kind comments !:))
I miss my wife, I still do !!
Cheers
Dani
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Hi, Guenter !:))
Thank you so much for your
most kind comments ! The drum
breaks yeah, I felt I had to
try out something different (lol)!!
Cheers
Dani
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Hi, Robert !
I´m so glad your kind
comments ! :))
Cheers
Dani
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Hi, Floyd !
Thank you for your most kind
comments. I think you are right
with your suggestions too !
The drum breaks ! Felt I had
to come up with something odd.
Cool that you liked it !:))
Cheers
Dani
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Hi, Janice & Bud !
I feel humbled by your
most kind comments, but you
are right, the lyrics come
right out of my heart as I
still do and will probably always
miss my dear late wife so much !:))
Cheers
Dani
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Hi, Mike !:))
Thanks for your most kind
comments ! You know you are
right about the RD:s they really
are two different styles !!:))
You are a most keen listener (chuckle) !:))
Cheers
Dani
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Dani, Nice drum breaks. Your chord progressions are always interesting. Nicely done. Tom
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Hi Dani. Lovely voice, feeling and intimate sound. Enjoyed the percussion.
Also had a few years with the barbershoppers. How about doing a song about them? Cheers.
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