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#269111 - 11/20/14 02:15 PM [User Showcase] You´re Making Me Feel So Fine
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Hi,fellowhearts !:))

Normally I would refrain from posting
another tune stright after another but,
Pat told me to return from Sweden to
make music for you and that is exactly
what I have been doing (LOL)...and
besides.....I am in love again !!!!:))

You´re Makin´Me Feel So Fine:

http://app.box.com/s/jq8cgn4r3p7902c00wae

http://soundcloud.com/dani-lindroos/you-are-making-me-feel-so-fine

Recorded and mixed with Mixcraft 6 using zoom H4n as mic

Style: BURTBAC1.STY BurtBac1 Ev 8ths Pop Rock
Instruments:
Bass: 34 Finger El Bass
Piano: 1 AC Piano
Drums: Realdrums = Bossa Rock / 8 HiHat
Guitar: 26 AC Guitar
Strings: 50 Slow Strings
Soloist 1: 2263 Piano AC Rhytm 80:s Pop Medium Ev 120
Soloist 2: 1840 Synth Pad

The Lyrics:

YOU`RE MAKIN´ME FEEL SO FINE (by Dani) ©Dani Lindroos 2014

I was alone for such a long time
I never thought I´d find the way back to rhyme
again, never, again
she had to go away
leaving me here in sorrow
each day was ever so gray,
like there was no tomorrow

She was the one I loved for so long
I never realized there was something wrong
and then, suddenly, it was all in vain
Why did she have to go
Why was she taken from me
you know I loved her dearly so
did´nt know what was to be…..

was to be, was to be….

Then you came by and lit up my sky
and now I´m not alone anymore
now you´re not really shy
like before
´cause you´re mine
leading me back to the rhyme
and you know that you´re mine
makin´me feel , oh so fine

solo…….

Why did she have to go
Why was she taken from me
you know I loved her dearly so
did´nt know what was to be…..

was to be, was to be….

Then you came by and lit up my sky
and now I´m not alone anymore
now you´re not really shy
like before
´cause you´re mine
leading me back to the rhyme
and you know that you´re mine
makin´me feel , oh so fine

´cause you´re mine
leading me back to the rhyme
and you know that you´re mine
makin´me feel, oh so fine
oh so fine…….fade away

Cheers
Dani

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#269116 - 11/20/14 03:14 PM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: dani48]
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Hi Dani,

First of all... Congratulations! laugh

And... what a beautiful song! This kind of music is the right music for your voice.
The backing vocals are also very nice, is that HER?

Go on making this kind of music.

Rob and Anne-Marie
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#269128 - 11/20/14 05:21 PM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: dani48]
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Really beautiful song!! Great emotion, sweet music. I think the Bacharach style suits you very well. Your style definitely reminds me of his. I was always a big fan. This is certainly one of my Dani favorites. Post to your heart's content-I never get tired of listening! Take care. Greg

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#269137 - 11/20/14 07:38 PM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: dani48]
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One of your best yet Dani, if not the best. Like others have said, this style fits you so well. I like your instrumentation on this one as well as the nice chord progression. And, as always, your vocals are spot on. It was a joy to listen to this one. Looking forward for another soon. Glad you are back and posting again.


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#269154 - 11/21/14 02:33 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: RnAM]
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Hi, Rob and Anne-Marie !:))

....and thank you so much
for your warm gratulations
and your most kind comments !:))


Cheers
Dani

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#269156 - 11/21/14 02:36 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: Greg Johnson]
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Hi, Greg !:))

Thank you Greg for your most
kind words ! yes, Bacharach
is one of my all time favorites !
I´ve always loved his music too !!!:))

Cheers
Dani

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#269157 - 11/21/14 02:43 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: dani48]
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dani – congratulation! :-)

life and love, what a great pair!

really liked the song, and singing – nice and enjoyable production, and WHO is singing with you?

njut livet, broder! :-)
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#269158 - 11/21/14 02:49 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: RnAM]
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Hi, Rob and Anne-Marie ! !

LOL ! I forgot to tell you that
it is me singing all voices !:))

Cheers
Dani

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#269159 - 11/21/14 02:51 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: molsenhouse]
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Hi, Molsenhouse !:))


Mange takk broder !:))
I am most thankful for your
most kind words brother !:))
It is me singing all voices !:))


Cheers
Dani

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#269162 - 11/21/14 03:31 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: dani48]
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Hi Dani!

Thanks for honoring my request for more music after your sailing adventure!

I am so glad to hear that you have found love again! I know the deep dark place you were in for such a long time, and it must be a great relief to be out of that pit.

I agree with other peoples' comment that the Burt Bacharach style is a good fit for you. The song is very nice and does a good job of expressing a wide range of emotions. My only observation is as follows:

Drawing the listeners mood from one very deeply felt negative emotion to a new deeply felt positive emotion within the span of a few minutes asks an awful lot of the listener's willingness to concentrate and really consider what you are saying. The willingness to project themselves into your emotion strongly affects how much they can be moved by the song.

Considering the possible ways to draw a listener in, I was reminded of a device that was used in the Wizard of Oz. Before Dorothy got to Oz, the film was in black and white... but in Oz, it was in technicolor! This simple change in video format implied differences very quickly and easily which would have taken many words to duplicate.

In a 3 minute song, there is no time to lyrically develop the idea that life is better in the 2nd half of the song. Taking the Wizard of Oz video idea and modifying it for audio, you could accomplish it very easily by making the first half of the song less decorated and very sparsely orchestrated. Then, when love appears, break out the violins and full blown orchestration!

But, I'm just rambling here, because being in the same situation as you, I have spent quite a bit of time thinking about how I would pursue a song like this. It's not the easiest kind of song to write, but you did it very well! I got sucked right into the vortex of the tornado. ;-)

Dani, your song provides hope for me too! Thanks!

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#269171 - 11/21/14 05:06 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: dani48]
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Dani, You sure have a handle on this style. But that doesn't mean you should stop experimenting. It is so easy do with BIAB. You sing this one very well. Great BG vocals. Nice job. Tom

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#269179 - 11/21/14 05:46 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: Pat Marr]
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Hi, Pat !

I did not know that you
were in the same boat with me
but now that I do, I sure
hope that you will manage
to steer the boat to the shore
bringing the journey to a
satisfying end !

Regarding the song, I fully
agree with everything you
said about it ! I should have
had a more significant change
of orchestration where the
good part begins ! I will keep
that lesson in mind lest I
should write a sequel ?

Brother Pat ! Take care
and may everything go well with
you !

Cheers
Dani

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#269181 - 11/21/14 05:52 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: dani48]
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B E A U T I F U L !


Edited by Janice & Bud (11/21/14 05:55 AM)
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#269190 - 11/21/14 06:27 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: dani48]
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Hi Dany,

what a beautiful song. It is the style that suits you best.
Great changes and harmonies. You've already answered Pat's nits.
A very enjoyable listen.
And congratulations by the way.

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#269194 - 11/21/14 07:09 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: Janice & Bud]
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Dear friends !

If you could see me
you might see an old
man with silver hair
and blushing chins !:))

I do not really know
how to express my
gratitude for your
sweet comment !!:))

Cheers
Dani

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#269197 - 11/21/14 07:12 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: boehm]
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Dear friend !:))

Thank you for your
congratulations and
for your all too
kind and warm words
so very much appreciated !:))
I knew that you love harmonies
so I tried to throw some in !:))

Cheers
Dani

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#269216 - 11/21/14 09:14 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: dani48]
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Oh, sooooo fine... indeed!

Beautifully done, Dani.

Love looks good on you!

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#269221 - 11/21/14 09:32 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: tommyad]
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Hi, Tommy !:))


Your warm and nice comments
go right to my heart !:))
I am most thankful for them !:))

Cheers
Dani

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#269222 - 11/21/14 09:38 AM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: floyd jane]
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Hi, Floyd !:))

LOL, thank you Floyd for
your most kind words !
I guess love and longing are
among the strongest emotions
driving songwriting and
performing ? I am glad
if I have been able to express
those feelings in a
convincing way to at least
a small extent ?

Cheers
Dani

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#269302 - 11/21/14 08:37 PM [User Showcase] Re: You´re Making Me Feel So Fine [Re: floyd jane]
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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Oh, sooooo fine... indeed!

Beautifully done, Dani.

Love looks good on you!

floyd



+1!!! Oh so fine, oh so fine....


Josie

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