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#284682 - 02/17/15 01:35 PM [User Showcase] Heaven and Hell
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And what if she turned up again???

HEAVEN AND HELL

And now, after a while
the flame has gone
but still it's ready to start a fire
the pilot 's on,
he knows so well
The moment she will turn up
everything starts again
he can't control the man

It starts with hello
And as they go on
being friendly polite he knows
He 's fooling them both
Coz if he could
He' d be all over her now
Hoping he could redeem
A love that was not to be
He will relive a dream

Out of the blue
he's out of line
She is heaven and hell in seconds time
And he doesn't mind

And now, after a while
the flame has gone
but still it's ready to start a fire
The pilot' s on
the time will come
that moment she will turn up
and everything starts again
He can’t control the man
One day they'll meet and then...

Out of the blue
he's out of line
She is heaven and hell in seconds time
And he doesn't mind




** Song Samenvatting *************

Titel: Heaven and Hell
Bestand:Heaven and Hell.SGU
Toonsoort=C , Tempo 90, Lengte (m:s)=4:06


PianoGebruikers Synth is Hi-Q 001 01 Piano, Acoustic, Grand SampleTank.tgs with VST "The Giant"

Stijl is _RKBALCL.STY (Rock Ballad m.Cello,ElGitn)

RealTracks in song: ~518:Bas,El,PopHalveNoot Ev85
MIDI SuperTracks in song: 2105:Piano,PopShining Gel120B
RealTracks in stijl: 1814:GitaarAk,FpckKeltischAir 85


RealTracks in stijl: ~387:Bas,El,Rtm,Metal Gel85
RealTracks in song: 677:Gtr,El,Rtm,RkBritDrive Gel85
RealTracks in song: 877:Gtr,El,Rtm,NrtRockFuzzStSw75
RealDrums in Stijl: RockBritDrivingEv16^1-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride

Choir by Realivox "The Ladies"
Vocals and Solo Guitar: yours truly

Any comments and suggestions are very welcome!
Thank you for taking time to listen

Fred


Edited by FredM (02/17/15 01:38 PM)

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#284691 - 02/17/15 03:06 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Beautiful song Fred!
Very good vocals and as the song goes on it becomes even stronger.
Your best song up to now!

Rob and Anne-Marie
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#284695 - 02/17/15 03:35 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Fred,

Excellent song. Great arrangement and love the way it builds.

Bob
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#284700 - 02/17/15 05:29 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Hey, Fred, GREAT tune!
I also really like the way it builds. I really dig your vocal stylin's, I love the way you, for example, hold the note of "mind" over the chord change(s). I like the overdriving guitar giving energy as the song builds.

A couple of very little things: if it was me, I'd want to tone way down the "-uh" heard after the "well" (of "he knows so well"), and maybe one or two additional instances -none of them glaring, mind you- of what I might call a "proximity effect" occurring in the vocals microphone, if I were trying to pretend I knew what I was talking about. All I know is that I hear it, and how I'm responding to it.

But yeah...VERY NICE, man! Solid poetry! Thanks for sharing! -Eric


Edited by DIOECHOOTO (02/17/15 05:32 PM)
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#284704 - 02/17/15 06:05 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Very cool all the way around-vocals, mix, production, and song!! I think it all works great. Much enjoyed!! Take care. Greg

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#284706 - 02/17/15 06:10 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Fred
Really beautiful, the gradual build works nicely, and the vocals are superb. Very nice!
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#284728 - 02/18/15 04:20 AM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Hi Fred,

I enjoyed listening to this a great deal. The arrangement is absolutely terrific. In addition, your performance and the production are top notch all the way!

All the best,
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#284765 - 02/18/15 09:03 AM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Fred, You really sang your heart out on this one. Great arrangement. Just beautiful all around. Very much enjoyed, Tom

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#284774 - 02/18/15 10:06 AM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Fred,

Really nice job. I love the melody on the chorus and the way it builds. I might of brought the band in on the first chorus... but that's just me. wink

Greg

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#284802 - 02/18/15 12:57 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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This is a beautiful song and an excellent write. This is very strong in every element.

I really enjoyed it.

Charlie
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#284818 - 02/18/15 01:49 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Hi Fred,

great song all over! Vocals, chords, arrangement.
I like the "Ladies" in the background.

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#284845 - 02/18/15 03:21 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Fred,

BRAVO!!!

Spectacular. Nice choice of piano. Perfect for that chord changes and the melody. Great idea to go with the MIDI Supertrack... The Hi-Q piano sounds terrific.

Your vocal is very nicely recorded - and VERY well sung!!! - and nicely balanced with the piano...

Your chorus gave me chills. M U S I C A L. It SINGS!!!

What a brilliant production! Don't know if you added that cymbal crash or it just "happened"... but it was PERFECT. (good drum sound!). The guitar solo is a nice addition...

I ENJOYED listening to this. BRAVO.

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#284847 - 02/18/15 03:26 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Hi Fred.

Beautifully crafted track.

Loved the arrangement and the vocal was spectacular.

Such a good song with an excellent lyric.

ROG.

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#285069 - 02/20/15 01:12 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: DIOECHOOTO]
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Originally Posted By: R & AM
Beautiful song Fred!
Very good vocals and as the song goes on it becomes even stronger.
Your best song up to now!

Rob and Anne-Marie


Rob and Anne-Marie,
Thanks for passing by and commenting. Having worked with BIAB for two months now, I'm having lots of fun, but I still am in a studying phase. Hoping to learn in listening to others while testing the flexibility of this great tool.
Hope to produce many more.
G
Fred

Originally Posted By: rsdean
Fred,

Excellent song. Great arrangement and love the way it builds.

Bob


Thank you Bob,
Always a pleasure getting those comments from you. Your newest song is still offline?


F



Originally Posted By: DIOECHOOTO
Hey, Fred, GREAT tune!
I also really like the way it builds. I really dig your vocal stylin's, I love the way you, for example, hold the note of "mind" over the chord change(s). I like the overdriving guitar giving energy as the song builds.

A couple of very little things: if it was me, I'd want to tone way down the "-uh" heard after the "well" (of "he knows so well"), and maybe one or two additional instances -none of them glaring, mind you- of what I might call a "proximity effect" occurring in the vocals microphone, if I were trying to pretend I knew what I was talking about. All I know is that I hear it, and how I'm responding to it.

But yeah...VERY NICE, man! Solid poetry! Thanks for sharing! -Eric

Hi Eric,
Thanks for passing by and commenting. You're right off course on the proximity effects. Normally I do three or four vocal takes, and then start putting the lead vocal together. Here I kept take four as a whole. I was so happy with the energy of it that I just put it in there.
I consider my productions as studies, and your comments really help! Thanks and see you around!
Fred

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#285114 - 02/20/15 08:35 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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Fred,

I almost missed this one...

What a great track. Love how your vocal and the arrangement builds. I'll second what's been said already. Beautiful. You have a really nice voice too.

Josie

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#285142 - 02/21/15 07:58 AM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: FredM]
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hi fred great vocal work everything perfect love this eric
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#285158 - 02/21/15 12:40 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: VideoTrack]
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Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Very cool all the way around-vocals, mix, production, and song!! I think it all works great. Much enjoyed!! Take care. Greg

Greg ,
Thanks for passing by and these kind comments.
Take care
F

Originally Posted By: VideoTrack
Fred
Really beautiful, the gradual build works nicely, and the vocals are superb. Very nice!


VT,
Thanks for taking time to listen. Happy with your kind comments.
F

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#285159 - 02/21/15 12:50 PM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: tommyad]
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Originally Posted By: Noel96
Hi Fred,

I enjoyed listening to this a great deal. The arrangement is absolutely terrific. In addition, your performance and the production are top notch all the way!

All the best,
Noel



Hi Noel,
Thanks for listening and commenting.
I do love how BIAB delivers what goes on in my head. Still I am just at the beginning of learning the finesses of this software.
So keep on posting ☺
G


Fred
Originally Posted By: tommyad
Fred, You really sang your heart out on this one. Great arrangement. Just beautiful all around. Very much enjoyed, Tom


Hi Tom,
Some good vocalists here to learn from. But indeed this is my first vocal production I'm pretty happy with ☺
Thanks for your encouragement
Fred

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#285242 - 02/22/15 11:27 AM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: boehm]
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Originally Posted By: boehm
Hi Fred,

great song all over! Vocals, chords, arrangement.
I like the "Ladies" in the background.

Guenter


Hi Guenter,
Thanks for passing by and listening. I have great plans for "The Ladies". However, I'm having some issues with the software, Realivox' support desk did not respond to my questions...

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#285244 - 02/22/15 11:31 AM [User Showcase] Re: Heaven and Hell [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Originally Posted By: Achordocaster
Fred,

Really nice job. I love the melody on the chorus and the way it builds. I might of brought the band in on the first chorus... but that's just me. wink

Greg


Greg,
Thanks for dropping by and listening. I brought in the cavalry at the very end ☺
Maybe they could have arrived sooner ☺☺☺

Originally Posted By: c_fogle
This is a beautiful song and an excellent write. This is very strong in every element.

I really enjoyed it.

Charlie


Hi Charlie,
Nice of you to drop by and commenting. Happy with it!

Fred

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