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A little morose ballad. ![wink wink](/forums/images/graemlins/default/wink.gif) Mostly BIAB, lost the original .sgu, so not sure which RT's. I apologize in advance for the clichés. https://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/jenny-doesnt-live-here-anymoreJenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore ©2014 Robert Randall Burke/BMI Jenny doesn't live here anymore Left it all behind and closed the door She lost all the battles Then she won the war Jenny doesn't live here anymore. Some vows are written in the sand One wave erases all your plans What is forever If forever never comes? When will she ever understand? Somewhere the sun is shining Through a cloud with a silver lining On a world where she can be reborn. Who knows where love goes when it dies? When does indifference arise? Does it slip away in darkness Like a thief in the night? Who knows where love goes when it dies? Somewhere the sun is shining Through a cloud with a silver lining On a world where she can be reborn. Jenny doesn't live here anymore. Regards, Bob
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"She lost all the battles Then she won the war "
"Some vows are written in the sand One wave erases all your plans"
This is an engaging write and the above lines really stuck with me. The arrangement and your vocal give an ethereal feel that really fits the lyric. Janice says she can picture her walking away through the fog. So....nice imagery!
We enjoyed listening.
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Very haunting and beautiful!! Love the arrangement and the use of the strings. Vocal is excellent. Great song all the way around! Take care. Greg
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Beautiful song, arrangement and production. One of your best.
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"little" is not a word I would use to describe that.
It's huge!
Dig those strings throughout - and especially the "lead"...
Awesome vocal. (I like the big reverb).
A great listen. (and a cool title!)
Plan to enjoyed many listens...
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Bob,
This is just fantastic! Really well done. Love the strings. Very reflective. Your vocals just keep getting better and better!
Love it.
Steve
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J&B, Greg, Charlie, floyd, Steve,
Thanks for listening and the kind remarks.
Regards,
Bob
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Bob, I really like the write. The chord progression is perfect for this. Well sung and the production is spot on. Like Janice, I also see Jenny slipping away in the fog. Great job! Tom
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I think this is your best to date.
Love your vocals - that reverb is outstanding!
Your lyrics are outstanding.
Super job on the chord changes and the strings.
Seated at the restaurant, He "Darling can you say something that makes my heart beat faster"? She "Your wife just walked in"!
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Tom - Thanks for listening and the kind comments. Mario - As a recovering (but incurable) reverb addict, I just can't help myself sometimes. ![grin grin](/forums/images/graemlins/default/grin.gif) Thanks for the kind remarks. Regards, Bob PG Music Persona non grata
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Bob,
Beautifully sung. Very Rod Mckuen vibe for me. Loved the piano, those strings and "she lost all the battles and then she won the war" - really nice.
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I agree with Janice and Bud these lines pop
"She lost all the battles Then she won the war "
"Some vows are written in the sand One wave erases all your plans"
Nice performance; thanks for sharing!
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Josie-
Thanks for the kind comments.
Robert -
Thanks for listening and the nice words.
Regards,
Bob
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Very haunting and beautiful!!Greg +1 on that. There's nothing simple about this, but I very much like the simplicity of the arrangement, if that makes any sense:) Your delivery and presentation, vocally and musically, outstanding!
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Very haunting and beautiful!!Greg +1 on that. There's nothing simple about this, but I very much like the simplicity of the arrangement, if that makes any sense:) Your delivery and presentation, vocally and musically, outstanding! Scott- Thanks for the kind words. I was actually very dissatisfied with this one, but finally just gave up. Regards, Bob
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Hi there Bob.
Wow, that's some powerful reverb you've got working there. Fabulous big stereo wash over everything.
Back in the 80s there was this thing for "Concept" albums and somehow this sounds to me like it's part of a bigger project. Whatever. Did I say I liked it? Well I love it.
You really do produce some excellent stuff, Bob.
Cheers, ROG.
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hi bob this very engageing and moves you great job everything thanks eric
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Hi there Bob.
Wow, that's some powerful reverb you've got working there. Fabulous big stereo wash over everything.
Back in the 80s there was this thing for "Concept" albums and somehow this sounds to me like it's part of a bigger project. Whatever. Did I say I liked it? Well I love it.
You really do produce some excellent stuff, Bob.
Cheers, ROG. Hi ROG. Thanks for listening. Yeah, it's flooded with verb, but that's the sound I was going for. Always been a big Phil Spector fan! ![grin grin](/forums/images/graemlins/default/grin.gif) Regards, Bob
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hi bob this very engageing and moves you great job everything thanks eric Eric - Thanks. Regards, Bob
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Great style! What is the instrument on the right? It sounds like a guitar, is it BIAB?
Wonderfully moody!
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