|
|
|
|
#310954 - 09/19/15 07:47 AM
[User Showcase]
While The Music Played
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
A little romantic ballad. Comments welcome. https://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/while-the-music-playedWhile The Music Played ©2015 Robert Randall Burke While the music played We danced Arm in arm we swayed Entranced Lost in love again A lover and a friend. All the stars aligned That night As we twirled beneath Their light Lost in love again Love that never ends. On the wings of memory I will fly away Your sweet love will carry me Back to a better day. Song Summary ************* Title: While The Music Played File:While The Music Played.SGU Key=C , Tempo 85, Length (m:s)=3:48 No intro. 77 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 77. Repeat x1 chorus No Melody No Soloist track. Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0, Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,RealDrums Changes, Style is _CBLGDBR.STY (BckGrndGuit PopDreamyBrent[85RS]) RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 2448:Guitar, Electric, Background, PopDreamyBrent Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 2444:Guitar, Baritone Electric, Background PopCountryBrent Ev 085 RealDrums in Song: NashvilleBrushesCountryPopEv16: a: Sidestick, Brushes b: Brushes Regards, Bob
Edited by 90 dB (09/19/15 08:01 AM)
Edit Reason: Lyrics
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310955 - 09/19/15 08:13 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: 90 dB]
|
|
Registered: 08/25/03
Posts: 3079
Loc: wales
Veteran
Registered: 08/25/03
Posts: 3079
Loc: wales
|
Bob,
beautiful!
a lovely tune, and a good arrangement, what was the string sound for the "solo"? 'cos it was really nice.
What a wonderful end!
"while the music played......we danced"
Alyn
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310956 - 09/19/15 08:53 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: 90 dB]
|
|
Registered: 06/22/12
Posts: 2886
Loc: Karlsruhe, Germany
Veteran
Registered: 06/22/12
Posts: 2886
Loc: Karlsruhe, Germany
|
Hi Bob,
just beautiful!
Guenter
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310964 - 09/19/15 10:46 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: 90 dB]
|
|
Registered: 04/07/13
Posts: 7631
Loc: South Carolina
Veteran
Registered: 04/07/13
Posts: 7631
Loc: South Carolina
|
I'll go with Lovely to keep beautiful from being used up. But it's beautiful too.
You are so on the mark with your songs.
My only personal nit was at 0:16 the guitar seemed to 'sail' in a way that overstated that particular phrase and was different from the rest of the guitar phrasing throughout the song. Very, very minor distraction of a second at most and I'm likely the only one it will ever affect. This was a good fit for your vocals.
Great write, performance and production as your songs always are.
Charlie
_________________________
BIAB Ultra Pak+ 2023:RB 2023, Latest builds: Dell Optiplex 7040 Desktop; Windows-10-64 bit, Intel Core i7-6700 3.4GHz CPU and 16 GB Ram Memory.
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310971 - 09/19/15 11:37 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: Charlie Fogle]
|
|
Registered: 03/04/07
Posts: 819
Loc: Germany
Expert
Registered: 03/04/07
Posts: 819
Loc: Germany
|
A delightful song Bob. The guitar is sweet and melodic and the strings are just perfect. Are they Realtracks?
_________________________
Chris
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310980 - 09/19/15 01:53 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: 90 dB]
|
|
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 10773
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 10773
Loc: Florida
|
Robert,
You old romantic, you!
It takes real talent to write such a meaningful song using so few words.
Real. Talent.
The production is one of your best! Besides what you listed in the style, there is also piano, organ, strings - all nicely done! The strings solo sounds like you must have played that - or certainly "wrote" it out in MIDI?
Your vocal is terrific... (but I think Johnny Mathis may be looking for this...)
Excellent through and through.
floyd
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310986 - 09/19/15 04:30 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: gibson]
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
Bob,
beautiful!
a lovely tune, and a good arrangement, what was the string sound for the "solo"? 'cos it was really nice.
What a wonderful end!
"while the music played......we danced"
Alyn
Alyn, Thanks for listening and the kind remarks. the strings were done with Dimension Pro. Hope you are well. Regards, Bob
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310987 - 09/19/15 04:31 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: boehm]
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
Hi Bob,
just beautiful!
Guenter Guenter, Thanks for listening and the nice words. Regards, Bob
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310988 - 09/19/15 04:34 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: Charlie Fogle]
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
I'll go with Lovely to keep beautiful from being used up. But it's beautiful too.
You are so on the mark with your songs.
My only personal nit was at 0:16 the guitar seemed to 'sail' in a way that overstated that particular phrase and was different from the rest of the guitar phrasing throughout the song. Very, very minor distraction of a second at most and I'm likely the only one it will ever affect. This was a good fit for your vocals.
Great write, performance and production as your songs always are.
Charlie Charlie - Thanks. I'll have to have a talk with the guitar player on that clunker.  Probably should have redone it, but it is what it is. Hope you are enjoying the most beautiful State in the country. (Oh, how I miss the Upstate!) Regards, Bob
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310989 - 09/19/15 04:36 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: CeeBee]
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
A delightful song Bob. The guitar is sweet and melodic and the strings are just perfect. Are they Realtracks?
Chris, Thanks for listening and the kind comment. The guitar is a Real Track, the strings are MIDI. Regards, Bob
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310991 - 09/19/15 04:58 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: gibson]
|
|
Registered: 08/24/07
Posts: 1872
Loc: Florida, USA
Expert
Registered: 08/24/07
Posts: 1872
Loc: Florida, USA
|
Hi Bob, beautiful ballad. Love the arrangement and the chords. Heck! I liked everything!
Mike B.
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310992 - 09/19/15 05:28 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: 90 dB]
|
|
Registered: 12/21/13
Posts: 6737
Loc: Davis, CA
Veteran
Registered: 12/21/13
Posts: 6737
Loc: Davis, CA
|
I love romantic songs, and this is a beauty Bob!! Sweet, simple melody that is instantly memorable. Lovely arrangement and vocal. Should be in a romantic scene of a film. Really tops all the way around!! Take care. Greg
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#310993 - 09/19/15 05:31 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: 90 dB]
|
|
Registered: 12/06/03
Posts: 5145
Loc: Sydney Australia
Veteran
Registered: 12/06/03
Posts: 5145
Loc: Sydney Australia
|
That was pretty. Liked the instrument choices and the additional sounds and as noted elsewhere the strings. An excellent production.
Very nice indeed. (Need a thesaurus when commenting late so as not to be repetitive!)
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#311008 - 09/19/15 07:48 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: 90 dB]
|
|
Registered: 10/31/08
Posts: 18049
Loc: Australia
Veteran
Registered: 10/31/08
Posts: 18049
Loc: Australia
|
Hi Bob,
I've been away from the forum for a while and this was the first song I listened to on my return. Wow! I can't believe that such a beautiful song only needed 61 words to mesmerise me. That really shows just how very competent you are at songwriting and arranging.
Everything about this says "this man really knows what he's doing" to me.
Outstanding!
Noel
_________________________
LINKS TO MY BIAB/RB SONGS
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#311022 - 09/20/15 03:28 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
Robert,
You old romantic, you!
It takes real talent to write such a meaningful song using so few words.
Real. Talent.
The production is one of your best! Besides what you listed in the style, there is also piano, organ, strings - all nicely done! The strings solo sounds like you must have played that - or certainly "wrote" it out in MIDI?
Your vocal is terrific... (but I think Johnny Mathis may be looking for this...)
Excellent through and through.
floyd floyd, Thanks for the listen and kind remarks. I step-sequenced the organ and strings in Sonar X3, with Dim Pro. I'll be glad to get this melody out of my head. Now that it's done, I can move on. Regards, Bob
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#311023 - 09/20/15 03:31 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: cubanpete]
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
Hi Bob, beautiful ballad. Love the arrangement and the chords. Heck! I liked everything!
Mike B. Mike, Thanks for listening and the nice comments. BIAB makes it easy. Regards, Bob
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#311024 - 09/20/15 03:33 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: Greg Johnson]
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
I love romantic songs, and this is a beauty Bob!! Sweet, simple melody that is instantly memorable. Lovely arrangement and vocal. Should be in a romantic scene of a film. Really tops all the way around!! Take care. Greg Greg, Thanks. Appreciate the listen and comments. Regards, Bob
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#311029 - 09/20/15 04:19 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: PeterF]
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
That was pretty. Liked the instrument choices and the additional sounds and as noted elsewhere the strings. An excellent production.
Very nice indeed. (Need a thesaurus when commenting late so as not to be repetitive!) Peter, Thanks for the kind remarks. Appreciate it. Regards, Bob
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#311030 - 09/20/15 04:29 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: Noel96]
|
|
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 04/20/10
Posts: 5139
Loc: Florida
|
Hi Bob,
I've been away from the forum for a while and this was the first song I listened to on my return. Wow! I can't believe that such a beautiful song only needed 61 words to mesmerise me. That really shows just how very competent you are at songwriting and arranging.
Everything about this says "this man really knows what he's doing" to me.
Outstanding!
Noel Hey Noel. Hope you are well. 61 words? Pretty wordy, I'd say. I haven't been posting much lately either. We've been playing out a lot, and it takes most of our time. We have two weeks off after today, so I'm going to get back in the studio. I've got 28 songs that I'm almost done with – I just lack the discipline to finish them. Don't miss floyd's newest one – it's a corker (or a “beaut” as you might say Down Under). Regards, Bob
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#311037 - 09/20/15 05:28 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: While The Music Played
[Re: 90 dB]
|
|
Registered: 04/03/09
Posts: 8639
Veteran
Registered: 04/03/09
Posts: 8639
|
I love hearing a minimalist song in a lyrical sense. It really takes a focused effort to convey the story with few words.
Regarding the guitar glitch there at 16 seconds.... MELODYNE. ME can fix that like it was never there.
Loved the DimPro strings. Tasty. I was expecting to hear a minimalist acoustic solo over them however, echoing the melody. It sounded like it started in that direction.
Great job on a lovely tune.
_________________________
You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.comAdd nothing that adds nothing to the music. You can make excuses or you can make progress but you can't do both.
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Band-in-a-Box® 2023 French for Windows is Here!
Band-in-a-Box® 2023 c'est plus de 70 fonctionnalités nouvelles et des contenus inédits à savoir : des SuperTracks MIDI, des Etudes Instrument, des Prestations Artiste "avec voix", les Xtra Styles PAK 14 & 15, le Set 2 RealTracks Jouables, les Sets 1 & 2 RealDrums Jouables, de nouveaux Sets "Stems RealDrums" et bien plus encore...!
Tous Packages | Nouvelles Fonctionnalités
Band-in-a-Box® 2023 German for Windows is Here!
Wir waren fleißig und haben über 70 neue Funktionen und eine erstaunliche Sammlung neuer Inhalte hinzugefügt, darunter MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studien, Künstler Performances, "Song mit Vocals", Xtra Styles PAK 14 & 15, Wiedergebbare RealTracks Set 2, Wiedergebbare RealDrums Set 1 & 2, neue Sets von "RealDrums Stems" und mehr!
Paket | Was ist neu
User Tip - FL Studio VST in Band-in-a-Box®
If you haven't checked out our Forums yet, you definitely should! It's packed with enthusiastic program users, BETA testers, members of the PG Team, new Users, songwriters, and more!
And they're all happy to share their projects and program knowledge! Like the recent "musocity" post, FL Studio VST in BiaB, where they share how they render their projects using this setup - they even added a video!
PowerTracks Pro® Audio 2023 is Here!
There are over 20 new features added to PowerTracks, including MIDI Vocoder and Fix Tuning modes for Audio Harmonies, MicroChords (up to 4 chords per beat), Reverse Audio Effects, easy Tab key navigation on the Chords Window, smoother mouse wheel operation on the Tracks Window, and much more!
PowerTracks Pro® Audio can be yours for as little as $49! Already own an older version of PowerTracks? PowerTracks Pro® Audio 2023 upgrades start at just $29! Review the purchase options and order now.
Band-in-a-Box® 2023 for Windows is Better Than Ever!
Update to Band-in-a-Box® 2022 Build 611 for Mac Today!
Congratulations 2022 User Showcase Award Winners!
We've announced the 2022 User Showcase Award Winners list of the top 45 contributors of 2022! They've each won a free Band-in-a-Box 2023 UltraPAK for Windows (including the 49-PAK)!
Read the announcement to see if you're on the list!
In 2022 we had over 1,000 new original compositions posted to the User Showcase by 143 different artists - WOW! To date, over 10,000 songs have now been posted in the Showcase! Thank you to everyone who has contributed over the years!
In 2022, there were 24,000 posts in the User Showcase forum, with 1 million views! There were song compositions posted from at least 19 countries, including: Australia, Belgium, Canada, Czech Republic, Denmark, Finland, France, Germany, Iceland, Ireland, Japan, Jersey Channel Is., Macedonia, Netherlands, New Zealand, South Africa, Sweden, UK, USA.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
37290 Members
66 Forums
77697 Topics
690062 Posts
Max Online: 2537 @ 01/19/20 07:09 AM
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Previous Topic
Index
Dansk
Deutsch - Windows
Español
Français - Windows
Italiano - Windows
Nederlands
Polski
Português
Svenskt
русский
Japanese
Simplified Chinese
Traditional Chinese
Korean