I agree with everyone else - great song, singer and a solid production. I can easily imagine how this song is going to shine with another level of polish.
My only thought is that song feels short
. The first verse feels like a second verse to me - it's very abstract. I'd like the first verse to set up a specific
scene of the ex-lovers "coming and going" before moving on to generalities.
Keep in mind this advice is coming from someone who's never written a successful song!
Verse 2 has the lyric "to mends our broken heart", which should probably be "to mend our broken hearts."
Anyway, really well done.