Previous Thread
Index
Next Thread
Print Thread
Go To
#457621 02/14/18 10:14 PM
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2017
Posts: 547
Journeyman
OP Offline
Journeyman
Joined: Aug 2017
Posts: 547
CAGE

I wrote this song today as part of a FAWM challenge. I really like how it turned out and wanted to share it with all my fellow BIAB users here. The challenge was to use the chords of your song to spell out the title or theme of your song. Being that there are only 8 chord letters (and maybe a few others if you get creative with your chords) it really is quite an interesting and challenging concept. I decided to use CAGE as my inspiration. Not 4 chords that you hear used all together very often but it actually came out very nice I think.

I decide that the chord structure for this tune called for more of a rock feel. So I found a kind of indie rock style that worked and ran with it. Hope you enjoy.

Style: _UKBIGRK.STY Rock w/ Crisp & Fuzz Guitars

RealTracks:
683:Bass, Electric, Pop Half Notes Push
405: Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming
1000:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Hard Rock LA Fuzz Held
998: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Hard Rock LA Crisp Sync
2688: Guitar, Electric Soloist Rock Brent Simple
Real Drums = Nashville Even 8

Lyrics:
I feel like I’m stuck in a cage.
I feel like I can’t get away.
I need to get out of here.
I need to stop living in fear.

I wanna jump the sun and ride the moon.
I wanna go too far and get there to soon.
I wanna ride a rocket ship into outer space
So don’t treat me like a rat and lock me away.

I feel like I’m stuck in a cage.
I feel like I can’t get away.
I need to get out of here.
I need to stop living in fear.

I wanna go around the world in 80 days.
I wanna be a criminal and save the day.
So don’t put me on a shelf and throw away the key
Just open up the door and set me free.

(Solo)

I feel like I’m stuck in a cage.
I feel like I can’t get away.
I feel like I’m stuck in a cage.
I feel like I can’t get away.


Samuel Davis Jr
BIAB 2018 + Cubase + Ignite
BMI

www.sammycountry.com
Samuel Davis #457652 02/15/18 04:19 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Nov 2007
Posts: 5,659
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Nov 2007
Posts: 5,659
It is amazing to me that you and and a few others can produce a quality song in such a short amount of time!

This is great, a good rock write, great vocal. Nice mix too, and the "band" is hot.

Samuel Davis #457658 02/15/18 04:34 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Jun 2017
Posts: 2,954
PG Music Staff
Offline
PG Music Staff
Joined: Jun 2017
Posts: 2,954
This particular style of song really suits you! This is also a really cool challenge, and I'd love to see more people participating in it! Awesome job.


Cheers,
Ember
Samuel Davis #457699 02/15/18 08:57 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Feb 2018
Posts: 65
K
Enthusiast
Offline
Enthusiast
K
Joined: Feb 2018
Posts: 65
This is great, especially given the time-compressed writing challenge. Very nice rock vibe!

Samuel Davis #457795 02/16/18 03:55 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,327
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,327
Man I never thought of that CAGE chord progression. But I'm sure going to use it now.

smile

This reminds me a lot of Country "Nirvana."

And by that, I mean this is seriously cool man!!!

If you keep going like this, you could end up being the Kurt Cobain of country.

smile

Good job.

Samuel Davis #457879 02/16/18 03:50 PM
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 23,144
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 23,144
This really good. Great groove with super vocals. The lyrics are super and the mix is perfect.

This is a keeper.


Whenever I get something stuck in the back of my throat, I dislodge it by drinking a beer.
It's called the Heineken Maneuver.

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware
Samuel Davis #457883 02/16/18 05:08 PM
User Showcase
Joined: May 2010
Posts: 1,719
Expert
Offline
Expert
Joined: May 2010
Posts: 1,719
Hi Samuel.

Like that chord progression.
Certainly sounds punky.
This is the line i like best.

I wanna go too far and get there too soon

Good FAWM song. Best wishes with the rest of them.

Cheers.

David Snyder #457976 02/17/18 10:32 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2017
Posts: 547
Journeyman
OP Offline
Journeyman
Joined: Aug 2017
Posts: 547
Thanks everybody for listening. I appreciate your comments.

Originally Posted By: David Snyder
Man I never thought of that CAGE chord progression. But I'm sure going to use it now.

smile

This reminds me a lot of Country "Nirvana."


Yeah, I never would have thought of it either had it not been for this challenge but I'm glad I did. I think it works well for this.

I definitely had some Nirvana grunge influence going through my head while working on this.


Samuel Davis Jr
BIAB 2018 + Cubase + Ignite
BMI

www.sammycountry.com
Samuel Davis #458243 02/19/18 07:47 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,969
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,969
Excellent tune. I got the Nirvana feel as well. Super vocal lyric and backtrack


Scott Collingwood
https://soundcloud.com/scottt709
https://soundcloud.com/spiritlevel-ca
https://www.youtube.com/@SpiritLevel-ge3hm/
Samuel Davis #458432 02/20/18 10:04 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 15,342
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 15,342
Lot's of goodness here even without consideration of the FAWM time constraints.

It all came together for you. The cool somewhat different progression works really well and, man, those vocals are nailed. The RT's sound like a band that has spent some time together and are all hittin' the note.
We enjoyed it!

J&B


Our albums and singles are on Spotify, Apple Music, Amazon Music, YouTube Music, Pandora and more.
If interested search on Janice Merritt. Thanks!
Our Videos are here on our website.
Samuel Davis #458435 02/20/18 10:08 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 5,643
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 5,643

An excellent vocal and an interesting chord progression combine to make a really excellent song.

Peter

Samuel Davis #458547 02/21/18 05:11 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Feb 2017
Posts: 3,414
PG Music Staff
Offline
PG Music Staff
Joined: Feb 2017
Posts: 3,414
Wow - you nailed this! Within the first few measures, I knew I'd be liking this one. The song has so much charisma and energy behind it - it makes me feel amped! Not to mention your vocal performance is truly next level. I wouldn't bat an eyelash hearing this on the radio.

You made a great song here - thanks for sharing smile


Cheers,
Deryk
Samuel Davis #459375 02/26/18 04:39 PM
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 7,043
G
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
G
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 7,043
Cool rocker, and clever idea of a way to find a chord progression....IT WORKED!! Wonderful vocal on this.. hear some Sammy Hagar. Really nicely done in every way! I particularly like this:

I wanna jump the sun and ride the moon.
I wanna go too far and get there to soon.

Very cool lyrics! Enjoyed! Take care. Greg

Previous Thread
Next Thread
Go To

Link Copied to Clipboard
ChatPG

Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.

ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.

PG Music News
Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Mac®: VST3 Plugin Support

Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Mac® now includes support for VST3 plugins, alongside VST and AU. Use them with MIDI or audio tracks for even more creative possibilities in your music production.

Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Macs®: VST3 Plugin Support

Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Mac®: Using VST3 Plugins

Join the conversation on our forum.

Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Mac Videos

With the release of Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Mac, we’re rolling out a collection of brand-new videos on our YouTube channel. We’ll also keep this forum post updated so you can easily find all the latest videos in one convenient spot.

From overviews of new features and walkthroughs of the 202 new RealTracks, to highlights of XPro Styles PAK 8, Xtra Styles PAKs 18, the 2025 49-PAK, and in-depth tutorials — you’ll find everything you need to explore what’s new in Band-in-a-Box® 2025.

Reference this forum post for One-Stop Shopping of our Band-in-a-Box® 2025 Mac Videos — we’ll be adding more videos as they’re released!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Mac is Here!

Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Mac is here, packed with major new features and an incredible collection of available new content! This includes 202 RealTracks (in Sets 449-467), plus 20 bonus Unreleased RealTracks in the 2025 49-PAK. There are new RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, “Songs with Vocals” Artist Performance Sets, Playable RealTracks Set 4, two new sets of “RealDrums Stems,” XPro Styles PAK 8, Xtra Styles PAK 19, and more!

Special Offers
Upgrade to Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Mac with savings of up to 50% on most upgrade packages during our special—available until July 31, 2025! Visit our Band-in-a-Box® packages page for all the purchase options available.

2025 Free Bonus PAK & 49-PAK Add-ons
We've packed our Free Bonus PAK & 49-PAK with some incredible Add-ons! The Free Bonus PAK is automatically included with most Band-in-a-Box® for Mac 2025 packages, but for even more Add-ons (including 20 Unreleased RealTracks!) upgrade to the 2025 49-PAK for only $49. You can see the full lists of items in each package, and listen to demos here.

If you have any questions, feel free to connect with us directly—we’re here to help!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 Italian Version is Here!

Cari amici
È stata aggerate la versione in Italiano del programma più amato dagli appassionati di musica, il nostro Band-in-a-Box.
Questo è il link alla nuova versione 2025.

Di seguito i link per scaricare il pacchetti di lingua italiana aggiornati per Band-in-a-Box e RealBand, anche per chi avesse già comprato la nuova versione in inglese.

Band-in-a-Box 2025 - Italiano
RealBand 2025 - Italiano

Band-in-a-Box 2025 French Version is Here!

Bonjour à tous,

Band-in-a-Box® 2025 pour Windows est disponible en Français.
Le téléchargement se fait à partir du site PG Music

Pour ceux qui auraient déjà acheté la version 2025 de Band-in-a-Box (et qui donc ont une version anglaise), il est possible de "franciser" cette version avec les patchs suivants:

BIAB 2025 - francisation
RealBand 2025 - francisation

Voilà, enjoy!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 German Version is Here!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 für Windows Deutsch ist verfügbar!

Die deutsche Version Band-in-a-Box® 2025 für Windows ist ab sofort verfügbar!

Alle die bereits die englische Version von Band-in-a-Box und RealBand 2024 installiert haben, finden hier die Installationsdateien für das Sprachenupdate:

https://nn.pgmusic.com/pgfiles/languagesupport/deutsch2025.exe
https://nn.pgmusic.com/pgfiles/languagesupport/deutsch2025RB.exe

Update Your Band-in-a-Box® 2025 to Build 1128 for Windows Today!

Already using Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows®? Download Build 1128 now from our Support Page to enjoy the latest enhancements and improvements from our team.

Stay up to date—get the latest update now!

Forum Statistics
Forums58
Topics84,207
Posts776,357
Members39,597
Most Online25,754
Jan 24th, 2025
Newest Members
susan6, oswaldo montenegro, gestes, TSIRY10, Albertcolin
39,596 Registered Users
Top Posters(30 Days)
MarioD 147
zedd 113
WaoBand 97
nonchai 82
rsdean 80
DC Ron 78
Today's Birthdays
There are no members with birthdays on this day.
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5