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#467876 - 04/18/18 11:39 AM [User Showcase] new song Jesus forgive me
Registered: 06/22/16
Posts: 338
Loc: england
Biglad Offline
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Registered: 06/22/16
Posts: 338
Loc: england
https://soundcloud.com/brad-stevens-uk/jesus-forgive-me-2
****** Song Summary *************
Title: JESUS FORGIVE ME
File:JESUS FORGIVE ME.SGU
Key=F , Tempo 85, Length (m:s)=3:51
No intro. 78 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 78. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,
Style is _LVLNPOP.STY (Country Ballad w/ Backing Violin)


RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065
RealTracks in style: ~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~363:Pedal Steel, Background Ev 085
RealTracks in style: 2338:Violin, Background, PopLow Ev 085 (1TrackStringSection)
RealTracks in song: 2033:Mandolin, Soloist CountryAndy Ev 065
RealDrums in style: NashvilleEven8^2-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, HiHat

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my latest offering.hope you enjoy.please feel free to comment



4 AM ON A EAST BOUND ROAD
MARKINGS GONE COVERED BY THE SNOW
I SAW IT SLIDE SAW IT ROLL
THEN IT HIT THAT TREE

HEARD THE CRASH SAW GLASS AND STEEL
FOUND THAT BODY BEHIND THE WHEEL
WITH HIS LAST BREATH HE TURNED
AND SAID THIS TO ME

JESUS FORGIVE ME FOR MY DRINKING
MY COMING HOME LATE COVERED IN SIN
JESUS FORGIVE ME WHAT WAS I THINKING
NOW IM WITH YOU I CANT HURT NO ONE AGAIN


THE PREACHER CALLED HIM REECE MALONE
LEFT FOUR KIDS AND A YOUNG WIFE AT HOME
THE YOUNGEST ONE THEY SAY WAS ONLY THREE

I STILL RECALL HIS FINAL WORDS
HE LOOKED AT ME AND JUST STARED
PLEASE DONT JUDGE ME FOR MY SINS



I BOWED MY HEAD AND I SAID A PRAYER
TRAVELLED DOWN THAT ROAD AGAIN
RIBBONS AND A TEDDY BEAR WHERE TIED ON THAT TREE

JESUS FORGIVE ME FOR MY DRINKING
MY COMING HOME LATE COVERED IN SIN
JESUS FORGIVE ME WHAT WAS I THINKING
NOW IM WITH YOU I CANT HURT NO ONE AGAIN
NOW IM WITH YOU I CANT HURT NO ONE AGAIN
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#467896 - 04/18/18 12:59 PM [User Showcase] Re: new song Jesus forgive me [Re: Biglad]
Registered: 12/23/17
Posts: 780
Loc: Alabama
cliftond Offline
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Registered: 12/23/17
Posts: 780
Loc: Alabama
Beautiful song and powerful!!! So well done here, the production is very good.

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#467905 - 04/18/18 01:34 PM [User Showcase] Re: new song Jesus forgive me [Re: Biglad]
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 10127
Loc: Florida
floyd jane Offline
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Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 10127
Loc: Florida
John,

Really nice job on this.

A good write...classic Country story and classic Country sound. Nice vocal. Good mix.

One of your best, I think. My favorite, anyway...

fj

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#467931 - 04/18/18 02:37 PM [User Showcase] Re: new song Jesus forgive me [Re: Biglad]
Registered: 01/28/12
Posts: 3470
Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia
Rob4580 Offline
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Great emotional song. Rob

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#467977 - 04/18/18 07:59 PM [User Showcase] Re: new song Jesus forgive me [Re: Biglad]
Registered: 03/31/17
Posts: 153
Loc: Philippines
Froi Offline
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Registered: 03/31/17
Posts: 153
Loc: Philippines
Beautiful song and a good reminder not to drink and drive.

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#468005 - 04/19/18 05:22 AM [User Showcase] Re: new song Jesus forgive me [Re: Biglad]
Registered: 12/29/10
Posts: 1520
Loc: Charlotte, NC
Tano Music Offline
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Registered: 12/29/10
Posts: 1520
Loc: Charlotte, NC
John, I really liked the song… Production was really great… I especially like how you highlighted the beginning of the chorus “Jesus” with.a full stop and just the voice… Your voice echoes were really good… Only recommendation I would make, you don’t really need the mandolin solo..I found it a little distracting in the very beginning and I don’t think it adds much to the song. Thanks for sharing this excellent work!

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#468029 - 04/19/18 07:53 AM [User Showcase] Re: new song Jesus forgive me [Re: Biglad]
Registered: 02/15/17
Posts: 3414
Deryk - PG Music Offline
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Registered: 02/15/17
Posts: 3414
Wow - you really did a great job here. A little on the morbid side, but the emotion here is incredible. It hits you right in the chest. Your vocals are seriously on point here. The whole tune just flows so well, and has so much life.

Really, really well done. Thanks so much for sharing smile
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Cheers,
Deryk

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#468148 - 04/20/18 05:49 AM [User Showcase] Re: new song Jesus forgive me [Re: Biglad]
Registered: 06/22/16
Posts: 338
Loc: england
Biglad Offline
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Registered: 06/22/16
Posts: 338
Loc: england
Thanks guys I appreciate the comments
john
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#468213 - 04/20/18 12:41 PM [User Showcase] Re: new song Jesus forgive me [Re: Biglad]
Registered: 12/08/11
Posts: 6563
Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada
Scott C Offline
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Registered: 12/08/11
Posts: 6563
Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada
Beautiful song and vocal

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