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#487871 - 08/26/18 05:23 AM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: floyd jane]
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GocartMoz Offline
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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Dave,

A very powerful write and a very powerful performance and presentation.

The piano/organ combination works really well for this. Nice production and mix. The "touch of fiddle", works well, too...

Seems like you have quickly "gotten comfortable" with the BAND!

Well done.

fj


Hey Floyd,

Thx as always for listening. I am definitely getting a better understanding of how powerful BIAB is. I am enjoying it and appreciate you recommending it to me. It has definitely opened up alot of possibilities. Appreciate your thoughts on this tune. I actually have a version with just vocal and piano which is how I originally envisioned it when I wrote it in 2013, but didn’t have any real piano chops. Very cool to hear it like I initially wanted.

Dave


Edited by GocartMoz (08/26/18 05:25 AM)

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#487918 - 08/26/18 10:10 AM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: GocartMoz]
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Robertkc Offline
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Dave,
Powerful,personal, raw lyrics and a vocal that carries the emotion.
Love the arrangement - plse post tracks if you can.
Excellent work!

Robert

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#487927 - 08/26/18 11:32 AM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: 44kfl]
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Loc: Florida
GocartMoz Offline
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Loc: Florida
Originally Posted By: 44kfl
A strong and emotional write, great performance

Florida is well represented on these forums by

really good songwriters!

I love the sparse backing, it's my "go to" very often

good storytelling, it put me in the "Lord save me from this fate"

frame of mind.

Kenny

Thank you very much for the comments Kenny it is greatly appreciated.

Dave

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#487928 - 08/26/18 11:33 AM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: Skyline]
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Loc: Florida
GocartMoz Offline
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Originally Posted By: Skyline
A remarkable song Dave, incredibly moving, sincere and so well put together.
Well done my friend.

John


Thank you very much John for taking the time to listen and comment. Greatly appreciated.

Dave

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#487929 - 08/26/18 11:34 AM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: rsdean]
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Loc: Florida
GocartMoz Offline
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Loc: Florida
Originally Posted By: rsdean
David,

This is very moving... I love the song and performance. Some very fine production here as well.

Bob


Thank you kindly Bob. I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment.

Dave

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#487930 - 08/26/18 11:46 AM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: Greg Johnson]
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Loc: Florida
GocartMoz Offline
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Registered: 06/13/18
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Loc: Florida
Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
POWERFUL, riveting, passionate!!! Beautifully done. I would not change a thing about this. BTW, is the piano an RT? I'd like to check that one out. My mom is 87 and this pretty much describes her life. It is difficult to watch. Fortunately her pain is relatively mild most of the time but there is so little there for her that I wonder how she pushes on. GREAT work here!! Take care. Greg


Thank you very much for your comments Greg. I am sorry to hear about the issue your mother is dealing with. I hope things improve. The piano is RT. I tried to edit the initial post with the tracks but I couldn't seem to edit it, so I am going to post here ... This song was done with all RT's in BIAB, aside from my vocal.

It is in the Key of G
80 BPM
Style is _QUASAR.STY: Quasar Minimal Moden Pop Ballad

Piano is 2693:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm ModernPop16thsMike Ev16075
Organ is 2592:Organ, Rhythm ModernPopSlowMike Ev075
Bass is -2475:Bass, Acoustic, HeldSimple Ev085
Drums are RealDrums-NashvilleBrushesBalladPushEv16: a: Sidestick, Brushes b: brushes
Fiddle is 1760 Fiddle, Background Pop 16 Ev85

Hope that helps


Edited by GocartMoz (08/26/18 04:25 PM)

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#488000 - 08/27/18 06:31 AM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: gruverider]
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Loc: Florida
GocartMoz Offline
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Originally Posted By: gruverider
Your vocal is filled with emotion! Wonderful choice of instruments and arrangement!

very much enjoyed!


Thank you very much for giving this a listen and commenting. It is greatly appreciated.

Dave

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#488002 - 08/27/18 07:05 AM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: GocartMoz]
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gibson Offline
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David,
Got to agree with all the previous posters.
This is excellent
You had me singing the second chorus on my first listen.

Enjoyed that a lot

looking forward to more

Alyn
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#488208 - 08/28/18 12:18 PM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: PeterF]
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Loc: Florida
GocartMoz Offline
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Registered: 06/13/18
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Loc: Florida
Originally Posted By: PeterF
Well that was a powerful and sad song. Really nicely produced written and performed.
A strong composition.
Peter


Thank you for listening and commenting Peter. It is greatly appreciated.

Dave

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#488351 - 08/29/18 10:39 AM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: Robertkc]
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GocartMoz Offline
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Thank you Robert,

I really appreciate your thoughts and time.

Dave

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#488451 - 08/29/18 05:41 PM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: GocartMoz]
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Loc: Aichi, Japan
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Hello, GocartMoz

Really strong vocal!
Your interpretation is so emotional.
I like Pre-chorus part the most.
That part proceeds with the E minor key, and it is very good it resolves with E major only at the end.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi

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#488459 - 08/29/18 06:18 PM [User Showcase] Re: The Dream [Re: GocartMoz]
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Steve Young Offline
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Very moving. Loved the ending. Powerfully done. Thanks for sharing it!

Steve
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