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Janne,
Very nice rock'n' roll song!
A little bit 60's American oldies feel.
Continuous eight beet is really comfortable.
Very enjoyable listen!
I missed the vocaloid version.
I would like to listen to it.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
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Cool man! Love those pep squad drums. Nothing wrong about writing about women. It's all I ever do.  Thanks David I love those drums too. And I do hope that there are still many aspects of that particular subject left to be written about Janne
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This was definitely a very emotional song. Thanks for sharing it with us. Thanks Ember for your kind feedback Janne
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This is a really good pop song. The intro and chord progressions are excellent. Your vocal is really good. Your dynamics are excellent making this song very powerful.
Excellent song. Thanks Mario for your very uplifting feedback I was after 'Powerful', glad you mentioned that magical Word Janne
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"a jungle in the dark
on your trail
there's no signpost to your spark"
Good lyric!
Enjoyed this eclectic production.
(Shots and holds in BIAB are often troublesome for me too. Usually not smooth.)
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Really cool song!! The groove is infectious! I'm going to have to check out those drums. Nice job on everything!! Take care. Greg Thanks Greg, glad you liked the groove Janne
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Excellent choice of RD's/RT's for this strong pop tune.
We very much like those drums...as others have already said.
There's a lot of raw emotion on display here...strong vocal delivery.
And the mix sounds excellent on our monitors. Everything sits in a good place!
Enjoyed it...
J&B Thanks Janice and Bud for your kind feedback BIAB has truly excellent selection of instruments for pop songs. Janne
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Very nice rock'n' roll song!
A little bit 60's American oldies feel.
Continuous eight beet is really comfortable.
Very enjoyable listen!
I missed the vocaloid version.
I would like to listen to it.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi Thanks Shigeki Adachi for your nice feedback You can find the original vocaloid version on YouTube, it was my first try with CyberSongman. The arrangement and lyrics have changed since then. Janne
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"a jungle in the dark
on your trail
there's no signpost to your spark"
Good lyric!
Enjoyed this eclectic production.
Thanks olemon for your kind words Always nice to read something positive about my lyrics  Janne
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Janne,
This song is great and the vocal performance is outstanding...
Great mix as well.
Bob
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Really nice, Janne! Has a bit of "That Thing You Do" feel to it. That's a compliment. Very few songs grabbed my attention, and wouldn't get out of my head like that song did. I have a feeling, your song is going to be stuck there in my mind for a while as well. When you accomplish that, as a songwriter, you've done something!
Steve
Steve Young Music"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of." - Robert Schumann
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My goodness. I hope you haven't had such a hard time with women. This was a very enjoyable listen. Lots of power in the rhythm section buoyed it up very well.
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Drums are awesome! Well written lyrics as per usual, and nice job on the mix also.
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Hi Janne, I have to quote floyd because he said everything that I thought... Janne,
This is really well done. A GREAT pop sound! Great drive to it.
Cool drums. It is great when someone uses a track that hasn't been displayed in the Showcase before...
Nice mix. Enjoyed.
fj Your singing is so full of confidence and it sounds great! In addition, that backing is produced so very, very well. Everything sits beautifully in my speakers and the sound is rich and full of clarity. All the best, Noel
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This song is great and the vocal performance is outstanding...
Great mix as well.
Bob Thanks Bob for your kind words I'm always worried that my vocals sound awful in other people's ears, so I'm really happy you liked my performance. Janne
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Really nice, Janne! Has a bit of "That Thing You Do" feel to it. That's a compliment. Very few songs grabbed my attention, and wouldn't get out of my head like that song did. I have a feeling, your song is going to be stuck there in my mind for a while as well. When you accomplish that, as a songwriter, you've done something!
Steve
Thanks Steve, your kind words are really rewarding I'm listening right now to the song you mentioned, I feel honored that you compared my tune to such a catchy pop hit song  Janne
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My goodness. I hope you haven't had such a hard time with women. This was a very enjoyable listen. Lots of power in the rhythm section buoyed it up very well. Thanks Tangmo, glad you enjoyed my song Hard time… not on physical level but maybe mentally, sometimes  Janne
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Drums are awesome! Well written lyrics as per usual, and nice job on the mix also.
Thanks Dave for your positive comment Janne
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Your singing is so full of confidence and it sounds great! In addition, that backing is produced so very, very well. Everything sits beautifully in my speakers and the sound is rich and full of clarity.
All the best,
Noel
Thanks Noel for your very kind words, I feel I don't deserve all of them, but they really mean much to me and give me confidence to continue singing Janne
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