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#543168 - 06/28/19 05:10 AM
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A Southern Girl
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https://soundcloud.com/kfl44/a-southern-girl-2-f A Southern Girl © 2019 Kenny Leverett Raised to respect But still just a little bit wild All grown up But to me she’s a woman child Just like a southern girl She’s a southern girl A southern girl She’s a southern girl Drives too fast Talks too slow But for all I need She’s the one to know A southern girl She’s a southern girl You’d better like her Daddy And hope that he likes you Cause that’s his little angel And your intentions Had better be true Cause she’s a southern girl She’s a southern girl A southern girl She’s a southern girl Cooks fried chicken And good cornbread That you’ll crave for the rest of your life Puts sweet notions Inside my head Sure feels right Just like a southern girl She’s a southern girl A southern girl She’s a southern girl Drives too fast Talks too slow But for all I need She’s the one to know A southern girl She’s a southern girl Bass 2903 Acoustic Blues Pop Piano 1690 Acoustic Pop Promise Drums Funky Groove 60s Mandolin 3080 Rhythm Americana Guitar 3161 Baritone Guitar 834 Alt Country Guitar 2689 Rock Brent Simple Solo Organ 671 B3 Thanks for the listen and comments
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#543186 - 06/28/19 07:03 AM
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Re: A Southern Girl
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Kenny,
This is the way Good Easy Southern Rock is written!!.. Has the flavor of Neil Young at his peak - or BETTER than than! Love it.
Cool opening. Good band. Nice solo...
Another good vocal (the highs could be rolled off a bit. It's a little "crispy"). Cool BGVs.
"Cooks fried chicken
And good cornbread
That you’ll crave for the rest of your life"
Oh, yeah.
Worth many listens...
fj
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#543191 - 06/28/19 07:51 AM
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Kenny, I agree with Floyd about the Neil Young comparison! The melody in the chorus is hit making material IMHO!! This one is without a doubt my favorite of anything I've heard of yours!! Thanks, Torrey
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#543196 - 06/28/19 08:33 AM
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Kenny,
You had me singing along on the chorus - love the rolling beat and that ( phased?) baritone guitar.
I like the description of this girl -she sounds as cool as your song!
Robert
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#543213 - 06/28/19 10:46 AM
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Re: A Southern Girl
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Kenny,
I love this! Absolutely KILLER SONG!
Great vocal and arrangement - love mix and guitar outro.
Bob
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#543232 - 06/28/19 12:42 PM
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Re: A Southern Girl
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Another nice one Kenny... Good lyrics... I really liked the line... Cooks fried chicken
And good cornbread
That you’ll crave for the rest of your life A nicely penned line to which "Southern" folk can relate. I enjoyed this one!
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#543251 - 06/28/19 03:07 PM
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Nice one..chorus is Brilliant, lyrics strong write, vocals are strong clear and suit this genre to a T.
I agree with Floyd on the brightness, and I found it a bit busy instrument wise.
Your voice would have been more prominent with less going on, as you have a strong clear vocal so why bury it.
This is a constructive critique and I hope you take it as that.
Enjoyed this.
Thanks
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#543262 - 06/28/19 04:14 PM
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What a tune! I really liked it - I enjoyed the groove, and it gave me a nice 90's rock vibe. Your vocals are definitely a standout and I thought there was some awesome progression. Loved the hook too. Nicely done - thanks for sharing 
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Deryk
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#543269 - 06/28/19 04:45 PM
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Kenny,
Another tasteful, both metaphorically and literally tune.
Lyrics and production are excellent! Organ was a very good choice. Very cool guitar solo!
Thank you for sharing!
Misha.
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#543302 - 06/28/19 07:39 PM
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Nice singing. I also hear a touch of Neil Young. Memorable melody, good arrangement. As usual, I enjoyed listening!
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#543303 - 06/28/19 07:44 PM
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They are among the best of the breed. And this is among the best songs I've heard anywhere in quite a while.
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#543350 - 06/29/19 11:01 AM
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Re: A Southern Girl
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Kenny,
This is the way Good Easy Southern Rock is written!!.. Has the flavor of Neil Young at his peak - or BETTER than than! Love it.
Cool opening. Good band. Nice solo...
Another good vocal (the highs could be rolled off a bit. It's a little "crispy"). Cool BGVs.
"Cooks fried chicken
And good cornbread
That you’ll crave for the rest of your life"
Oh, yeah.
Worth many listens...
fj Thanks Floyd, I never thought of Neil Young but Southern Girl/Southern Man... i think the lyrics are a little corny and the vocal is so so the vocal mix sounds good to me which says that I'm not hearing what you do and now Beatmaster too this is a problem that I've repeated too many times here I'm gonna give some serious thought to just stopping.
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#543351 - 06/29/19 11:02 AM
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Kenny, I agree with Floyd about the Neil Young comparison! The melody in the chorus is hit making material IMHO!! This one is without a doubt my favorite of anything I've heard of yours!! Thanks, Torrey Thanks Torrey, I appreciate the listen and kind words I don't hear Neil but I'll listen with him in mind, interesting cause I like NY a lot.
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#543352 - 06/29/19 11:04 AM
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Kenny,
You had me singing along on the chorus - love the rolling beat and that ( phased?) baritone guitar.
I like the description of this girl -she sounds as cool as your song!
Robert Hey Robert, that baritone is cool ain't it, I'll have to look up the style that it came from it had that sound already set up. thanks for the listen and kind words.
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#543353 - 06/29/19 11:05 AM
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Kenny,
I love this! Absolutely KILLER SONG!
Great vocal and arrangement - love mix and guitar outro.
Bob Thanks Bob!
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#543354 - 06/29/19 11:07 AM
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Another nice one Kenny... Good lyrics... I really liked the line... Cooks fried chicken
And good cornbread
That you’ll crave for the rest of your life A nicely penned line to which "Southern" folk can relate. I enjoyed this one! Hey Jim, we do love that southern cooking don't we? cornbread is so personal, everybody makes it a little different love me some with honey in the mix, or cracklins, or jalapeños. thanks for the kind words
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#543355 - 06/29/19 11:12 AM
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Nice one..chorus is Brilliant, lyrics strong write, vocals are strong clear and suit this genre to a T.
I agree with Floyd on the brightness, and I found it a bit busy instrument wise.
Your voice would have been more prominent with less going on, as you have a strong clear vocal so why bury it.
This is a constructive critique and I hope you take it as that.
Enjoyed this.
Thanks Hey Beatmaster, Thanks for the listen and kind words, not offended but noooooooo!!! let me indulge by piling on the tracks, I usually do sparse arrangements I want this to sound like a train comin' thru there are some dynamics with things dropping in and out I noticed the Soundcloud visual looks almost maxed out all thru, maybe it normalized (whut) when it also messed up my lead vocal! thank you for the compliments
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#543356 - 06/29/19 11:14 AM
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What a tune! I really liked it - I enjoyed the groove, and it gave me a nice 90's rock vibe. Your vocals are definitely a standout and I thought there was some awesome progression. Loved the hook too. Nicely done - thanks for sharing Deryk, thanks even in the 90s I was playing that 60s and 70s vibe credit must go to BiaB
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#543357 - 06/29/19 11:15 AM
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Kenny,
Another tasteful, both metaphorically and literally tune.
Lyrics and production are excellent! Organ was a very good choice. Very cool guitar solo!
Thank you for sharing!
Misha.
Thanks Misha, glad that you liked the organ, I do too!
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#543364 - 06/29/19 12:58 PM
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I'm gonna give some serious thought to just stopping.
Oh, no, don't you dare!!!
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