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Song has a good feeling.
I like the character of the vibe on this.
You've got some technical difficulties to overcome but don't abandon this, it's a winner.
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Well done! A bit more dry than I would like (or dare  ). Nice write, well sung.
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Hi Dave,
"Did I say something unforgiving or unfair
to betray the trust I made you doubt was really there?"
When I read that line I thought: 'What a great line, but it's gonna take a good melody line and vocal to make it sing well"
And that's exactly what you did. Throughout the whole song. Simply beautiful in lyric, melody and delivery.
"So Breathe". What a great title to build a song around. And what a great song.
I would like to hear a little more variation in the guitar part, but that's a personal thing. I loved it.
Martin
Music is what feelings sound like.
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James, Stefan, Birchwood, Misha, Guitarhacker, Robert, J&B, Peter, CaptainMoto, David, and Martin:
Thanks all for the listen and the comments. I think it’s near unanimous the guitar needs some work. The RealTrack I used was the closest to what worked—but those who have heard the original G/V version don’t care for it, and it doesn’t seem to resonate with those that haven’t. It also required me to play the song at a slightly slower tempo. I’m thinking I need to revisit and perhaps play the guitar piece myself (as I ended up deciding to do on a new song). Let’s see when I have a chance to get back to it.
Very helpful feedback all. Thanks again for the support.
J&B—Thanks for the software recommendation—I’ll look for it!
My best to you all,
Deej
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I don't know I missed this one earlier; I'm glad I found it.
Expert compelling vocal delivery that conveys the emotion.
Lyrically, something most of us can identify with.
Beautiful song!
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Deej,
Somehow I missed this one. This has been arranged in such fine fashion! I love that chorus and especially that minor chord is so effective! A great ballad! Thanks, Torrey
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Ezekiel and Torrey,
Glad you liked the tune despite the production challenges. Something I’m going to give another go at some point, but good to know it works well enough as is to enjoy to some degree. Thanks much for the listen and support.
Regards to you each,
Deej
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Hi Deej,
I love the ambience that this arrangement creates. It's beautiful. Your vocals are outstanding and the very open and airy backing frames your voice so very well.
There is a great deal of clarity to the sound that I am hearing. Whatever you've done, you've done it so well.
I'm a fan!
All the best,
Noel
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Noel,
Very kind comments as always. It’s one of my favorite songs that I’ve written, but the more I listen to this production, the less I like what I’ve done with it. I’m going to have to give it a redo at some point. But I’m glad you liked it as is.
All my best to you,
Deej
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hi deeji this was a excellent vocal everything was perfect you nail it thanks for sharing eric
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