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#662082 - 06/27/21 12:12 PM
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Saint Of San Juaquin
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A song about a valley in California. https://soundcloud.com/90-db/saint-of-san-juaquinhttps://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/saint-of-san-juaquinSaint Of San Joaquin © 2021 Robert Randall Burke There's a fire in the valley You can see it through the trees Burnin' up the memories Of the life we used to lead. There's an owl up in a pine tree Watchin' the smoke swirl Embers in the wind now All that's left of our old world. All the old ones know me As The Saint Of San Joaquin If you close your eyes You'll see me in your dreams. Many good men have gone under Many good men have survived Outlaws never live too long Once judgment has arrived. All the old ones know me As The Saint Of San Joaquin If you close your eyes You'll see me in your dreams. There's a fire in the valley You can see it through the trees Burnin' up the memories Of the life we used to lead. There's an owl up in a pine tree Watchin' the smoke swirl Embers in the wind now All that's left of our old world. All the old ones know me As The Saint Of San Joaquin If you close your eyes You'll see me in your dreams. Close your eyes You'll see me in your dreams. Regards, Bob
Edited by 90 dB (06/28/21 05:38 AM)
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#662224 - 06/28/21 01:16 PM
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Re: Saint Of San Juaquin
[Re: 90 dB]
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What a great write, and presented with remarkable imagery.
Your vocal and the melody deliver that melancholy lyric right to the listener's heart.
The band is a perfect "nothing left to add nothing left to take away" choice and wrapped in a great mix.
Yeah, we like it ... a lot!
J&B
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#662255 - 06/28/21 05:34 PM
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Re: Saint Of San Juaquin
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Pretty good mix and a nice song! Well done!
Will
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#662269 - 06/28/21 07:01 PM
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Re: Saint Of San Juaquin
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+1 on what Janice and Bud said. Lovey vocal and lyric. Very enjoyable listen. Well done..
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#662274 - 06/28/21 07:46 PM
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Nice vocal - pleasant listen!
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#662342 - 06/29/21 10:04 AM
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Re: Saint Of San Juaquin
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What a great write, and presented with remarkable imagery.
Your vocal and the melody deliver that melancholy lyric right to the listener's heart.
The band is a perfect "nothing left to add nothing left to take away" choice and wrapped in a great mix.
Yeah, we like it ... a lot!
J&B
Thanks guys. Appreciate the listen. Regards, Bob
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#662453 - 06/30/21 06:15 AM
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Pretty good mix and a nice song! Well done!
Will Will, Thanks for listening and commenting. Regards, Bob
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#662551 - 06/30/21 05:27 PM
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+1 on what Janice and Bud said. Lovey vocal and lyric. Very enjoyable listen. Well done.. Scott, Thanks for the listen. Regards, Bob
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#662552 - 06/30/21 05:28 PM
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Nice vocal - pleasant listen! David, Thanks. Regards, Bob
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#662581 - 07/01/21 05:17 AM
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This is a great presentation and enjoyable listen from start to finish.
Charlie
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#662584 - 07/01/21 05:31 AM
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Outstanding presentation, Bob. Every aspect supports every other. Right from the idea of the song, the lyrics, melody, band selection, production, mix and outstanding vocal delivery --all on the top shelf of creativity.
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#662592 - 07/01/21 07:49 AM
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Always enjoyable hearing another one from you, Robert....
Nice melody, well sung...
fj
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#662635 - 07/01/21 05:47 PM
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Bob, this may be your best to date IMHO. Great imagery. Your vocal was excellent and the backing tracks were exactly what was needed for a song like this.
I really enjoyed this one.
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#662745 - 07/02/21 05:09 PM
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This is a great presentation and enjoyable listen from start to finish.
Charlie Charlie, Thanks for the listen and kind comments. Hope all is well with you. Regards, Bob
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#663294 - 07/08/21 06:22 AM
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Outstanding presentation, Bob. Every aspect supports every other. Right from the idea of the song, the lyrics, melody, band selection, production, mix and outstanding vocal delivery --all on the top shelf of creativity.
Marty, Thanks for the listen and the kind comments. Regards, Bob
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#663369 - 07/08/21 01:45 PM
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I like this. Country rock that sounds like something that might have come out of the canyon back in the day.
Solid song.
Well done.
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#663374 - 07/08/21 02:22 PM
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Terrific job - good melody, really good vocal performance and solid , supportive arrangement.
I was left wanting to know the rest of the story tough. Just two short verses an a chorus, all repeated, left a very sketchy narrative.
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#663501 - 07/09/21 09:13 AM
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Man this is really good Bob! The vocal is outstanding as well as the writing! You've crafted an excellent sounding tune that is easy on the ears and stays with the listener! Thanks, T
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#663611 - 07/10/21 06:36 AM
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Always enjoyable hearing another one from you, Robert....
Nice melody, well sung...
fj Floyd, Thanks for the listen. Regards, Bob
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#663699 - 07/10/21 10:43 PM
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Bob this is beautiful. Everything about it. Course you know I'm a fan.
Josie
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