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#668836 - 08/17/21 10:03 AM
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Realized
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A love song. Simple. REALIZED a stay at home movie night in the middle of the week you get lost in their heartache a tear on your cheek then you catch me staring i can't help but grin you hide your face in a pillow but your laughing again that's when i realized you are my everything every wish my heart has whispered every dream i've dared to dream realized your eyes shine when you're scheming an easy, innocent read you dance in the kitchen i move in for the lead that's when i realized you are my everything every wish my heart has whispered every dream i've dared to dream realized how lucky can one man get i have realized you are my everything every wish my heart has whispered every dream i've dared to dream realized The BAND bits... RealTracks in song: 1190:Bass, Electric, ModernRnBRock Ev 065 RealTracks in song: 1828:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm PopModernGroove Ev16 075 RealTracks in song: 1830:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopModernGrooveBrightDist Ev16 075 MIDI SuperTracks in song: 2099:Piano, Rhythm PopModernGrooveHeld Ev16 075 MIDI SuperTracks in song: 1801:Synth Pad, PopShiningSoft Ev 120 RealTracks in song: 2585:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PunkHeldPlus Ev 165 RealTracks in song: 2690 Guitar, Electric, Soloist Slow16thsPopBrentSimple Ev16 075 RealDrums in Song:Rock16ths^01-a:Closed Hat, Snare, b:Open Hat, Snare Royalty Free Loops Comments welcome. fj
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#668851 - 08/17/21 12:03 PM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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Perfect in every way.
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#668868 - 08/17/21 03:43 PM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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Floyd,
That intro is some slick stuff! One immediately recognizes pro quality production at work here!
That piano working with the drums is so sweet and man do they sound good! Every instrument lays in the perfect spots!
This is such a good song and your vocal performance does it justice!
Excellent!
Thanks, Torrey
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#668876 - 08/17/21 04:11 PM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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Hi Floyd. your songs are always something especial
and, this is no exception. Your passionate vocal
really highlight's the well crafted lyrics.
The production is superb. I enjoyed my listen.
Tanks for posting. Regards Rob4580
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#668889 - 08/17/21 06:17 PM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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FJ,
the pause before the chorus is emblematic of this song.
It's perfectly timed, creates expectation and follows through.
Kitchen sink/living room drama.
The known as comfort, creation and new discovery.
ACED it!
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#668893 - 08/17/21 06:56 PM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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Hi Floyd,
You really have a way of coming up with songs that invoke such sweet and real to life imagery. Great mix and vocals. I enjoyed listening to it.
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#668895 - 08/17/21 07:48 PM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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Loc: Christchurch, New Zealand
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Hi Floyd,
Another excellent song - good chord progression, lyrics and powerful vocals.
Best Regards
Nigel
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#668900 - 08/18/21 02:52 AM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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Hello Floyd,
This is you, in and out!
It's going to be hard to find superlatives to describe the quality of your song, the band and its mix.
They are all very good/ outstanding.
What I liked very much was that guitar you hear after each sentence in the verse, kind of stacato rhythm.
I don't know how to describe that in proper English, but it gives a nice kind of tension.
Except the somewhat sudden end, it is a -very nice- straight forward song, with supernice lyrics.
Nice to listen to, in your chairs, with your wife and a glass of whatever and dreaming of the times that were.
At least, that's what it did to me. And my wife grinned...
Enjoy your day,
Hans
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#668904 - 08/18/21 03:37 AM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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Floyd,
Another polished pro-sounding song... Amazing production and vocal.
Absolutely loved it!
Bob
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#668913 - 08/18/21 06:54 AM
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[Re: rsdean]
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FJ.
nice lyrics and laid back feel.
i echo bob, very polished production.
best
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#668922 - 08/18/21 08:34 AM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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Floyd,
This is my favorite vocal of yours so far.
Really outdid yourself on that.
The rest is awesome as always.
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#668952 - 08/18/21 11:51 AM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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Hi floyd jane,
Pretty melody of love. Nice choice of chords compared to the well-written lyrics. You manage to make us live your emotions. I appreciated.
Kindly regard
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
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#669008 - 08/18/21 03:57 PM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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floyd
Simply a great song, impressive in every way.
Your songwriting gift and performance really shine on this one.
Peter
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#669028 - 08/18/21 05:40 PM
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Hi Floyd another well done song very pro sounding the vocal was excellent as everything else so well thought out!!!! Eric
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#669059 - 08/18/21 10:36 PM
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Re: Realized
[Re: floyd jane]
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The lyrics conjure some lovely images, Floyd and the vocals and production are as polished and professional as always. Another high quality entry in the FJ songbook.
Regards,
Leon
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#669075 - 08/19/21 05:30 AM
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[Re: floyd jane]
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You say love song, and it's surely a song to love. Such quality, such talent, such passion. I like what Ray says a bout the pause before the chorus. Man, you sure have an uncanny ability to make songs memorable. I've read or heard many pros talk about what's important in song writing and each and every song you do checks all the boxes as if YOU are the one they all talked about. Thanks, Floyd.
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#669103 - 08/19/21 09:00 AM
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[Re: HearToLearn]
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#669170 - 08/19/21 07:43 PM
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Re: Realized
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Floyd Jane...
I am beginning to regard your songwriting/performing legacy on the User's Forum not as a series of (very fine) productions released over a period of time, but rather a continuous, stream-of-musical-consciousness that flows out of the root of your being and then branches out into these songs that, in my opinion, simply reveal the many rooms that exist in your heart. Kind-of-like a tree that grows different kinds of fruits -- apples, then oranges, then grapes, then peaches -- each with their own taste and texture, but all of them sweet.
You sing about love, but then you describe scenes that vividly flesh-out the tone and the feeling of the kind of love you're crooning about: "...you dance in the kitchen, I move in for the lead." What a beautiful line, a moment in time captured and freeze-framed for the benefit of future generations. Unforgettable, man.
The music sounds inevitable, as though the notes were the only ones the lyrics would accept. Your singing is passionate not for what you express that is explicit in the lyrics, but for what you leave for us to imagine.
It is a sublime pleasure to witness your ever-developing artistry as a songwriter.
Edited by bluage (08/19/21 07:59 PM)
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#669193 - 08/20/21 07:24 AM
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FJ, Listened to it when you posted, re- listened it today. What can I say... you have a black belt in writing country/pop songs. Very neat, easy listening arrangement (I have a problem with doing that ) Fantastic vocal performance! Mix is super clear. Thank you for sharing. Misha.
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#669197 - 08/20/21 07:28 AM
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Another nice one from the FJ studio.
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