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#678173 - 10/17/21 03:39 PM [User Showcase] Time After Time
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Time After Time

A song of reflection (and a fox).

Leon - Lyric & Vocal
I played guitar & sang a bit.

The Band:
RealTracks in style: 3123:Bass, Acoustic, Pop8thsSteady Ev 085
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RealTracks in style: 668:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm SouthernRock Ev 085 (B:steady)
RealTracks in song: 2668:Pedal Steel, Background WestCoastBallad Ev 065
RealDrums [in Song:AmericanaSlow8thsFred: a: Snare, HiHat b: Snare, Ride

Time After Time


Look out my window, there’s brother fox
What’s he doing in my garden?
Some things never change and some get lost
Some hearts soften and some harden

Some thoughts are hard to keep at bay
They keep coming back day after day
Worm their way into my mind
Drag the sadness back, time after time

Look out! the prophets cry, the world is ending
I recall when I thought that they were wrong
But now take a look at how things are trending
Looks more like a question of how long

Some thoughts are hard to keep at bay
They keep coming back day after day
Worm their way into my mind
Drag the sadness back, time after time

Look for the sun to break on through the clouds
Look out for those little acts of kindness
Hope springs eternal, maybe we can turn aside
That flood of avarice and blindness

Some thoughts are hard to keep at bay
They keep coming back day after day
Worm their way into my mind
Drag the sadness back, time after time

Look to my lover to bring me solace
To offer me a place to hide
She lays a trail of crumbs for me to follow
Find the way back to my better side

Some thoughts are hard to keep at bay
They keep coming back day after day
Worm their way into my mind
Drag the sadness back, time after time
Time after time after time

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#678185 - 10/17/21 05:20 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Hi Peter. This one is outside the box lyric wise
and that's a good thing.

"Look for the sun to break on through the clouds
Look out for those little acts of kindness"

Very well crafted.
Congrats to all involved.
Rob4580

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#678241 - 10/18/21 01:08 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Hello Peter,

Very nice lyrics, but that is one of your strong things!
A very nice song, with a good band performance. I like that solo till the end.
A bit of hard rock entwined in a 'romantic' song with acoustic guitars.
The chorusses were strong, and with a nice bg vocal.
Yep, that makes a good song fantastic!

Hans


Edited by Birchwood (10/18/21 01:37 PM)
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#678242 - 10/18/21 01:24 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: Rob4580]
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Originally Posted By: Rob4580
Hi Peter. This one is outside the box lyric wise
and that's a good thing.

"Look for the sun to break on through the clouds
Look out for those little acts of kindness"

Very well crafted.
Congrats to all involved.
Rob4580


Thanks Rob.

Peter

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#678251 - 10/18/21 03:52 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Loved the lyrics!

Super vocal, mix, and guitar tone and chops.

Loved it.
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#678264 - 10/18/21 05:11 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: MarioD]
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your a very good lyricist mate.
the spread of your lyrics/ideas is very impressive.
i liked the lead break, maybe with a little less fuzz.

best to you.
om
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#678286 - 10/18/21 08:10 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Nice collaboration. Well written song. Vocals are easy going yet the message is so heavy - nice contrast. Great electric guitar playing as always. Good one.
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#678306 - 10/19/21 04:05 AM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Peter / Leon,

This is a great song... Love the lyrics and vocal. Awesome mix as well.

Bob

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#678310 - 10/19/21 05:30 AM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Excellent lyrics, Leon!

Nice production, love the bit at 3:18 where the band mostly drops out and the vocal harmony is added.

Nice solo and outro solo, Peter. Just the right amount of fuzz for me wink

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#678311 - 10/19/21 05:34 AM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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A good write, Peter, and your guitar is always such a treat. As mentioned, you craft some brilliant lyrics, Leon, and sing them so well. Great delivery and a strong message.
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#678338 - 10/19/21 08:58 AM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Hi Peter,
An easy song to listen to and reflect. The lyrics you wrote invoke such imagery. Sadness and then hope...
Your vocals also set the mood and were well done. And finally, the solo at the end sounded great. Thanks for posting, I enjoyed the listen.

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#678368 - 10/19/21 12:48 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Peter & Leon.
Soft and sad tune. Good set of lyrics. This is pretty clever:
"She lays a trail of crumbs for me to follow
Find the way back to my better side"

Super guitar parts. Clear mix, listens easy. Fun photo smile Thank you for sharing.

Misha.

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#678381 - 10/19/21 01:53 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: Birchwood]
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Originally Posted By: Birchwood
Hello Peter,

Very nice lyrics, but that is one of your strong things!
A very nice song, with a good band performance. I like that solo till the end.
A bit of hard rock entwined in a 'romantic' song with acoustic guitars.
The chorusses were strong, and with a nice bg vocal.
Yep, that makes a good song fantastic!

Hans


Thanks a lot Hans.

Peter

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#678385 - 10/19/21 02:10 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Lovely stuff,
Nice guitar tone too.
"Some things never change and some get lost
Some hearts soften and some harden"

Worth the price of admission alone.
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#678406 - 10/19/21 03:59 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Good vocal delivery on this. I dig the harmony too.

Guitar, as I expect would be, is superbly performed and crafted. Especially the ending part!

Strong chorus.

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#678535 - 10/20/21 02:07 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: MarioD]
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Originally Posted By: MarioD
Loved the lyrics!

Super vocal, mix, and guitar tone and chops.

Loved it.



Thanks Mario.

Peter

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#678639 - 10/21/21 12:56 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: justanoldmuso]
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Originally Posted By: justanoldmuso
your a very good lyricist mate.
the spread of your lyrics/ideas is very impressive.
i liked the lead break, maybe with a little less fuzz.

best to you.
om


Thanks

Peter

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#678640 - 10/21/21 12:56 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: jptjptjpt]
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Originally Posted By: jptjptjpt
Nice collaboration. Well written song. Vocals are easy going yet the message is so heavy - nice contrast. Great electric guitar playing as always. Good one.


Appreciate the listen thanks.

Peter

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#678646 - 10/21/21 03:23 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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Hey this sounds really good guys.

I enjoyed it a lot.

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#678681 - 10/21/21 07:04 PM [User Showcase] Re: Time After Time [Re: PeterF]
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A nice write for sure.
Nice vocals, guitar sounds great.
Well done.

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