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#683229 - 11/16/21 01:03 PM
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REMAINS OF THE DAY
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So, I have been having a blast learning to play the piano and this is my second piano tune. I am playing both parts and am really enjoying what the piano can do. Who knew!  Yeah I'm looking at you Floyd! I got something to prove! Oh heck yeah. Come on! Remains of the Dayby David Snyder https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs3/remains-of-the-dayV1 It remains to be seen If you and I will be alive this time and place in another year So we're just living for today Cause we don't see another way To overcome a world that’s based in fear PC But we will not Surrender yet and We will not Soon forget All the dreams we had Along the way And we will not accept these chains When we dream of hope Through window panes At the remains The remains of the day CH So bang the drum and sing it loud Raise the torch in the crowd And if you can, then lead the way Yeah bang the drum in the setting sun They must remember what we've done As we save whatever's left of this for us In the remains of the day V2 It remains to be seen If you and I will still survive but hey we know we're not the only ones wise women say believe your eyes truth is what you recognize and I'd rather stay and fight than I would run PC So we will not Surrender yet and We will not Soon forget All the dreams we had Along the way And we will not accept these chains When we dream of hope Through window panes At the remains The remains of the day CH Outro David Snyder Piano, Guitar, Vocals, Strings, Synth Production, Engineering, Mastering All music and lyrics copyright 2021 by David Snyder, ASCAP/Day of Faith Records Title: Remains of the Day File:Remains of the Day4.SGU Key=F , Tempo 80, Length (m:s)=3:24 RealTracks in song: 909:Bass, Electric, SmoothPoppy Ev16 090 RealTracks in style: 676:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming FolkRockBritEighths Ev 085 RealDrums [in Song:MetalSlowBigTomGroove: a: Toms, Snare b: Busy Big Toms, Snare
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#683232 - 11/16/21 01:28 PM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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David...great job on the keys especially when you get to the syncopated chords...the song is brilliant...great hook and lyrics...has a little Dylan feel to it...thanks for posting this...great listen...Dan
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#683248 - 11/16/21 02:37 PM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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Hi David,
Good passionate song and vocal delivery.
Well done
Best Regards
Nigel
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#683274 - 11/16/21 03:39 PM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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Very much like early Springsteen to my ears. Really enjoyed it.
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#683299 - 11/16/21 06:32 PM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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David,
Brilliant, just brilliant write . . . and beautifully delivered. Loved my listen. Yes, as TuneMonger mentioned, a very early Bruce feel to it, but in the end all you. Exceptional tune!
And, BTW, I'm a bit jealous--I'd love to learn piano, but don't think I could ever quite master it. Congrats on taking that on and clearly excelling at it.
All my best,
Deej
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#683319 - 11/16/21 08:13 PM
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I like your piano playing. Good Bruce type song. Well written. Good use of BIAB too.
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#683386 - 11/17/21 04:58 AM
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I like that. I think it's easily one of your best songs.
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#683411 - 11/17/21 06:44 AM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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Very powerful and positive lyrics delivered in a strong stadion rocker style, nice live feel. Learning to play the piano has paid off, talent can be heard. The band also work well, especially the drums.
Janne
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#683413 - 11/17/21 06:50 AM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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David,
This song has everything great that you are known for... Love it!
One of your best vocals and the mix is perfect.
Love your piano playing BTW. Awesome stuff!
Bob
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#683422 - 11/17/21 07:25 AM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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David,
Love it!
Well written.
Excellent vocal.
Nice job on the piano. Is the piano from a VST or a physical keyboard? (what is it?)
Really nice arrangement. Solid mix.
A song that begs to be heard many times.
fj
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#683471 - 11/17/21 11:16 AM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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Hey thanks Dan! I really appreciate the kind words. I have been trying my hand at some early Elton John and it kind of gets into your blood. Syncopation is where it's at man.
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#683545 - 11/17/21 04:38 PM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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I am with Herb on this one David. As much as I love your guitar playing. You did a great job on the piano. What a super vocal and lyric. They were both the star of the show. Well done.
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#683590 - 11/17/21 08:05 PM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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Nice anthem. Inspiring! Good job on the piano. It's a lot easier on the fingers than the guitar, innit? But it was really the vocal that sold it - well done. 
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#683621 - 11/18/21 02:57 AM
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Nice job on the piano, David!
Great vocal, lots of passion.
Excellent song!
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#683665 - 11/18/21 06:32 AM
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Ah, proof positive. Man, what a strong and vibrant song. Great passionate vocal. I love this line "truth is what you recognize." Very engaging sound. Oh, and, yes, your piano playing is really a HUGE addition, David.
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#683710 - 11/18/21 09:13 AM
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Hello David
The song is really great
BiaB is used very well
Great melody and really good singing
Very well done
Many greetings
Andi ;-)
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#684200 - 11/20/21 02:59 PM
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Re: REMAINS OF THE DAY
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Hey thanks Nigel! I am really glad you liked it!
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#684201 - 11/20/21 03:08 PM
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Nice ballad David.
Well done.
Rob4580
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#684278 - 11/20/21 10:02 PM
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David,
Nice ballad.
And it's very brilliant.
I think it's the power of vocals and arrangements.
I agree with Janne.
Learning to play the piano has paid off, talent can be heard.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
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#684289 - 11/20/21 10:59 PM
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Banging out the chords works... the massive potential of 10 notes in harmony is scary.
I really like the more syncopated bridge part/prechorus or what ever it is.
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