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ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder #748652 01/10/23 02:15 PM User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina David Snyder OP Veteran
OP David Snyder Veteran Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina	One More Whiskey Song So the original title for this song, right up until the last second, was Another Floyd Jane song. I was doing it as a joke for Floyd as Tater Totts to compete with him in the gut-wrenching, heartbreaking, cry your eyes out genre. But when I got finished with EVERYTHING, I said, "No. This is not that bad. Change the title and hook to one more WHISKEY song." Maybe next time Floyd! There is still time!! ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG by David Snyder https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs3/one-more-whiskey-song V1 Driving down the road I crashed my car She flew through the windshield And hit that asphalt tar Might have had too much to drink Don't remember all that much But the sheriff said my breath did stink They put handcuffs on me, first, then came the hospital room PC And she looked up at me with tears in her eyes Said I guess our love has brought me to the end of my life In a few more minutes I'll be gone So could you sing me Just one more Whiskey song CH Sing me one more Whiskey song before I die Cuz you were drinking and you wrecked that car Should have never learned to drive But at least the song might make you a country music star About whiskey, and a car wreck And a love affair gone wrong So sing me...while you're crying and I'm dying Just one more Whiskey song V2 Next thing I knew I was headed down death row With shackles on my feet so I was walking mighty slow The warden said the chair is ready and you know it won't be long So before you get that shock Could you sing us one more song CH Sing me one more Whiskey song before you die Cuz you were drinking and you wrecked that car Should have never learned to drive But at least the song might make you a country music star About your love affair with whiskey And a human life that’s gone So sing me...while you're crying and dying Just one more Whiskey song Bridge And some bets that are made Are just made to be lost When I rolled and flipped that car I regret the dice I tossed CH So I’ll sing you one more Whiskey song before I die I was drinking and I wrecked that car Should have never learned to drive But at least the song might make me country music star So let me sing it one more time for all the things that I’ve done wrong Just one more Whiskey song Oh just one more Whiskey song Music and lyrics copyright 2023 by David Snyder. ASCAP/Day of Faith Records David Snyder: Guitar, Vocals, instrumentation, mixing, mastering production. RealTracks in style: 1036:Bass, Electric, NorthernRockBallad Ev 065 RealTracks in style: 832:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm AltCountryMoody Ev 075 RealTracks in style: 803:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm DrivingCountryBalladClean Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085 RealDrums in style:AmericanaSlowRockFred^2-a:Sidestick ,HiHat , b:HiHat ,Snare David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers https://davidsnydersongs.com/ https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #748740 01/11/23 06:15 AM User Showcase
Joined: Feb 2022 Posts: 909 California Brad Williams Expert
Brad Williams Expert Joined: Feb 2022 Posts: 909 California	Hi there David. I like the hook to this and really like the cord progression and overall sound of the song. I realize the writing started out as just having some fun with Floyd, but with a bit of work and your writing/production talent I think you could have a seriously good song here. You're always good at stirring up some fun on the forum, looks like we're in for another good year of fun with David Snyder! https://soundcloud.com/user-722422510/tracks

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder Brad Williams #748743 01/11/23 06:49 AM User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina David Snyder OP Veteran
OP David Snyder Veteran Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina	Thanks Brad, I just sent you a p.m. Would love to hear your thoughts on revisions. Yeah, it started out as a total joke until I realized it might have a nugget to it. Let's talk. David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers https://davidsnydersongs.com/ https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #748747 01/11/23 07:15 AM User Showcase
Joined: Jan 2014 Posts: 1,797 Pembrokeshire vicarn Expert
vicarn Expert Joined: Jan 2014 Posts: 1,797 Pembrokeshire	Hey David. A little controversial for some and you probably won't get it on a major label, but it's clever writing so your work is done. Who needs major labels anyway? Good production too. Vic Last edited by vicarn; 01/11/23 07:16 AM.

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #748767 01/11/23 08:31 AM User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2009 Posts: 9,543 Middlesex, NC Guitarhacker Veteran
Guitarhacker Veteran Joined: Apr 2009 Posts: 9,543 Middlesex, NC	Glad to see you're back on the sunny side of life again. That's a little on the dark side but it is well done Last edited by Guitarhacker; 01/15/23 02:27 AM. You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.com Add nothing that adds nothing to the music. You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both. The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #748797 01/11/23 11:45 AM User Showcase
Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 Veteran
Rob4580 Veteran Joined: Jan 2012 Posts: 3,615 Murgon Queensland Australia	Hi Dave. This is excellent. Funny thing, I just finished writing a whisky song. "When in doubt write a whisky song" All the best with this Regards Rob 4580 https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder vicarn #748799 01/11/23 11:51 AM User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina David Snyder OP Veteran
OP David Snyder Veteran Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina	Thanks Vic! Hopefully, it filled your heart with good cheer and frivolity!! Do you think they will play it at your local pub as a happy sing a long??? David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers https://davidsnydersongs.com/ https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #748815 01/11/23 12:53 PM User Showcase
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 4,219 Florida tommyad Veteran
tommyad Veteran Joined: May 2011 Posts: 4,219 Florida	Dave, The chorus is killer. The chord progression is excellent, The guitars sound great. I'm not sure about the first verse. To my ears there is an extra line in there at the end that doesn't match up with the 2nd verse. But hey maybe you wanted it that way. There's no rules especially in Snyderworld! You are your own man. I listened multiple times ,so i guess that's what we're after. I enjoyed it a whole lot. Here's to ya, Tom

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #748840 01/11/23 02:11 PM User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 21,285 Hamlin NY MarioD Veteran
MarioD Veteran Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 21,285 Hamlin NY	Now that is a freakin' funny song! I really liked this. I few suggestions if I may: Turn the car into a pickup truck Get mad as your easy rider rifle rack and rifle got busted The moonshine you were hauling rolled off the truck and hit a train and the train caught on fire Yes sir that would be bonafide country song! Just kidding this is a really great song as is! Seated at the restaurant, He "Darling can you say something that makes my heart beat faster"? She "Your wife just walked in"! 64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #748902 01/12/23 03:14 AM User Showcase
Joined: May 2019 Posts: 3,583 Dallas, PA, USA BabuMusic Veteran
BabuMusic Veteran Joined: May 2019 Posts: 3,583 Dallas, PA, USA	Hi, David. Well, emulating Floyd Jane is a terrific motivator, but a lofty goal unattainable by most. Man, you definitely have that "gut-wrenching, heartbreaking, cry your eyes out genre" down. Your lyrics are so good, and my favorite line is "Next thing I knew I was headed down death row." That's overkilling the sadness. You had a good girl there who still wanted to hear another song of yours, and even the warden had good taste. Last edited by BabuMusic; 01/12/23 03:14 AM. Enjoy whatever happens! marty YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@babumusic51 SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/marty-straub and https://soundcloud.com/babumusic-5080285 Band in a Box, Reaper, Cakewalk, Ozone 11

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder MarioD #748974 01/12/23 12:19 PM User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina David Snyder OP Veteran
OP David Snyder Veteran Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina	Mario, This is country gold. We need to do a co-write. Meet me at Jack's BBQ in ten minutes. Bring your six string. David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers https://davidsnydersongs.com/ https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #749008 01/12/23 04:26 PM User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2016 Posts: 6,407 Cooran Queensland Australia rayc Veteran
rayc Veteran Joined: Apr 2016 Posts: 6,407 Cooran Queensland Australia	REALLY cool progressions & structure with a good band. Is whisky really as prevalent in US life as your songs suggest? I loathe the stuff myself and don't know anyone who drinks it other than my old man. It's funny but dangerous, sad but a parody. I assume the almost rhymes are part of the fun too. Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #749020 01/12/23 07:00 PM User Showcase
Joined: Sep 2010 Posts: 6,861 Sacramento, California dcuny Veteran
dcuny Veteran Joined: Sep 2010 Posts: 6,861 Sacramento, California	Was that a song about having one more whiskey or one more song about whiskey? Either way, you had me at the title! Fun write, exactly as promised. You've once again demonstrated the golden rule of sad country songs: when you think you've crossed the line, just keep on walking. Speaking of walking: Next thing I knew I was headed down death row With shackles on my feet so I was walking mighty slow Now that's a lyric! -- David Cuny My virtual singer development blog Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #749064 01/13/23 08:24 AM User Showcase
Joined: Nov 2006 Posts: 3,843 Finland jannesan Veteran
jannesan Veteran Joined: Nov 2006 Posts: 3,843 Finland	Very funny, a country parody to be taken seriously, you never fail to surprise. Now I have an urge to write my own whiskey song and somehow make it mightier than yours Janne Hear My Music: Soundcloud YouTube

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #749117 01/13/23 04:12 PM User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2011 Posts: 7,639 Edmonton, Ab, Canada Scott C Veteran
Scott C Veteran Joined: Dec 2011 Posts: 7,639 Edmonton, Ab, Canada	Cool country tune David. Excellent lyric and loved the backtrack. Well done Scott Collingwood https://soundcloud.com/scottt709 https://soundcloud.com/spiritlevel-ca https://www.youtube.com/@SpiritLevel-ge3hm/

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder Guitarhacker #749136 01/14/23 06:08 AM User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina David Snyder OP Veteran
OP David Snyder Veteran Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina	Thanks Herb! Yeah, just an natural born optimist man. I may be walking down death row, but at least I have this country song!! David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers https://davidsnydersongs.com/ https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #749147 01/14/23 07:59 AM User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2018 Posts: 1,869 Mill Valley, California USA D Deej56 Expert
Deej56 Expert D Joined: Apr 2018 Posts: 1,869 Mill Valley, California USA	David, Terrific write and a great hook! As ray noted, really cool chord progressions in this and I like the choice of the electric guitars on this production. On the whole, it's a little dark thematically, but a slick listen regardless. Great stuff! All my best to you, Deej

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder Rob4580 #749326 01/15/23 05:00 PM User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina David Snyder OP Veteran
OP David Snyder Veteran Joined: Aug 2014 Posts: 7,969 North Carolina	Thanks Rob! Can't wait to hear it! David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers https://davidsnydersongs.com/ https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #749388 01/16/23 06:55 AM User Showcase
Joined: May 2014 Posts: 4,048 The Netherlands RnAM Veteran
RnAM Veteran Joined: May 2014 Posts: 4,048 The Netherlands	Excellent song David! Especially the chorus, great music there. This is a real "David song". And you sing it very well. Rob and Anne-Marie We are Rob Meulman and Anne-Marie Bovenkamp from The Netherlands. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC1gsdNLE7_Gy8qavoOplQow/videos http://rnam.net/

Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder David Snyder #749392 01/16/23 07:23 AM User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 11,831 Florida floyd jane Veteran
floyd jane Veteran Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 11,831 Florida	"The warden said the chair is ready and you know it won't be long So before you get that shock Could you sing us one more song" Does it get any better than THAT??? As I said in an earlier thread - I told Bill, when he sent me the lyric - that I've never liked dead-wife songs. Dead-soldier songs are even worse (and then he sent me one of those, too). Fortunately we stopped before doing the dead-dog song. BUT.... I never considered the I-caused-my-girlfriend's-death song. Dark humor runs cold in your veins, son. Excellent modern-Country backing. Love those guitars! An excellent vocal for The Row. Death or Country Music. Y'all ain't right. An we get the rewards from that... Count us Lucky. fj 150+ Songs produced using BIAB RealTracks And 50 more... and some more...

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