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#748652 - 01/10/23 04:15 PM [User Showcase] ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder
Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina David Snyder Veteran Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina	One More Whiskey Song So the original title for this song, right up until the last second, was Another Floyd Jane song. I was doing it as a joke for Floyd as Tater Totts to compete with him in the gut-wrenching, heartbreaking, cry your eyes out genre. But when I got finished with EVERYTHING, I said, "No. This is not that bad. Change the title and hook to one more WHISKEY song." Maybe next time Floyd! There is still time!! ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG by David Snyder https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs3/one-more-whiskey-song V1 Driving down the road I crashed my car She flew through the windshield And hit that asphalt tar Might have had too much to drink Don't remember all that much But the sheriff said my breath did stink They put handcuffs on me, first, then came the hospital room PC And she looked up at me with tears in her eyes Said I guess our love has brought me to the end of my life In a few more minutes I'll be gone So could you sing me Just one more Whiskey song CH Sing me one more Whiskey song before I die Cuz you were drinking and you wrecked that car Should have never learned to drive But at least the song might make you a country music star About whiskey, and a car wreck And a love affair gone wrong So sing me...while you're crying and I'm dying Just one more Whiskey song V2 Next thing I knew I was headed down death row With shackles on my feet so I was walking mighty slow The warden said the chair is ready and you know it won't be long So before you get that shock Could you sing us one more song CH Sing me one more Whiskey song before you die Cuz you were drinking and you wrecked that car Should have never learned to drive But at least the song might make you a country music star About your love affair with whiskey And a human life that’s gone So sing me...while you're crying and dying Just one more Whiskey song Bridge And some bets that are made Are just made to be lost When I rolled and flipped that car I regret the dice I tossed CH So I’ll sing you one more Whiskey song before I die I was drinking and I wrecked that car Should have never learned to drive But at least the song might make me country music star So let me sing it one more time for all the things that I’ve done wrong Just one more Whiskey song Oh just one more Whiskey song Music and lyrics copyright 2023 by David Snyder. ASCAP/Day of Faith Records David Snyder: Guitar, Vocals, instrumentation, mixing, mastering production. RealTracks in style: 1036:Bass, Electric, NorthernRockBallad Ev 065 RealTracks in style: 832:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm AltCountryMoody Ev 075 RealTracks in style: 803:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm DrivingCountryBalladClean Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085 RealDrums in style:AmericanaSlowRockFred^2-a:Sidestick ,HiHat , b:HiHat ,Snare _________________________ David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers Spotify Etc. https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder/songs www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder
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#748740 - 01/11/23 08:15 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 02/23/22 Posts: 635 Loc: California Brad Williams Journeyman Registered: 02/23/22 Posts: 635 Loc: California	Hi there David. I like the hook to this and really like the cord progression and overall sound of the song. I realize the writing started out as just having some fun with Floyd, but with a bit of work and your writing/production talent I think you could have a seriously good song here. You're always good at stirring up some fun on the forum, looks like we're in for another good year of fun with David Snyder! _________________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-722422510/tracks
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#748743 - 01/11/23 08:49 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: Brad Williams]
Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina David Snyder Veteran Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina	Thanks Brad, I just sent you a p.m. Would love to hear your thoughts on revisions. Yeah, it started out as a total joke until I realized it might have a nugget to it. Let's talk. _________________________ David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers Spotify Etc. https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder/songs www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder
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#748747 - 01/11/23 09:15 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 01/03/14 Posts: 1148 vicarn Expert Registered: 01/03/14 Posts: 1148	Hey David. A little controversial for some and you probably won't get it on a major label, but it's clever writing so your work is done. Who needs major labels anyway? Good production too. Vic Edited by vicarn (01/11/23 09:16 AM)
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#748767 - 01/11/23 10:31 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 04/03/09 Posts: 8633 Guitarhacker Veteran Registered: 04/03/09 Posts: 8633	Glad to see you're back on the sunny side of life again. That's a little on the dark side but it is well done Edited by Guitarhacker (01/15/23 04:27 AM) _________________________ You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.com Add nothing that adds nothing to the music. As the sword chooses the warrior, so too, the song chooses the writer.
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#748797 - 01/11/23 01:45 PM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 01/28/12 Posts: 3588 Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia Rob4580 Veteran Registered: 01/28/12 Posts: 3588 Loc: Murgon Queensland Australia	Hi Dave. This is excellent. Funny thing, I just finished writing a whisky song. "When in doubt write a whisky song" All the best with this Regards Rob 4580 _________________________ https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob https://open.spotify.com/artist/6IPuZM4B48Drnd38DEWC7L https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoXdTc0EC_3aaZSqT4dyzug Using Studio One.
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#748799 - 01/11/23 01:51 PM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: vicarn]
Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina David Snyder Veteran Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina	Thanks Vic! Hopefully, it filled your heart with good cheer and frivolity!! Do you think they will play it at your local pub as a happy sing a long??? _________________________ David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers Spotify Etc. https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder/songs www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder
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#748815 - 01/11/23 02:53 PM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 05/22/11 Posts: 3810 Loc: Florida tommyad Veteran Registered: 05/22/11 Posts: 3810 Loc: Florida	Dave, The chorus is killer. The chord progression is excellent, The guitars sound great. I'm not sure about the first verse. To my ears there is an extra line in there at the end that doesn't match up with the 2nd verse. But hey maybe you wanted it that way. There's no rules especially in Snyderworld! You are your own man. I listened multiple times ,so i guess that's what we're after. I enjoyed it a whole lot. Here's to ya, Tom
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#748840 - 01/11/23 04:11 PM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 12/27/03 Posts: 18670 Loc: Hamlin NY MarioD Veteran Registered: 12/27/03 Posts: 18670 Loc: Hamlin NY	Now that is a freakin' funny song! I really liked this. I few suggestions if I may: Turn the car into a pickup truck Get mad as your easy rider rifle rack and rifle got busted The moonshine you were hauling rolled off the truck and hit a train and the train caught on fire Yes sir that would be bonafide country song! Just kidding this is a really great song as is! _________________________ She told him she wanted to walk down the aisle. He sent her grocery shopping! 64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software and some hardware
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#748902 - 01/12/23 05:14 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 05/27/19 Posts: 2461 Loc: Dallas, PA, USA BabuMusic Veteran Registered: 05/27/19 Posts: 2461 Loc: Dallas, PA, USA	Hi, David. Well, emulating Floyd Jane is a terrific motivator, but a lofty goal unattainable by most. Man, you definitely have that "gut-wrenching, heartbreaking, cry your eyes out genre" down. Your lyrics are so good, and my favorite line is "Next thing I knew I was headed down death row." That's overkilling the sadness. You had a good girl there who still wanted to hear another song of yours, and even the warden had good taste. Edited by BabuMusic (01/12/23 05:14 AM) _________________________ Enjoy whatever happens! marty Babu Music on YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCLDrsXTXfShgnGalQZ0ElQw Me on SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/marty-straub My website: http://martystraub.com/ using Band in a Box, Reaper, Cakewalk, Ozone 10
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#748974 - 01/12/23 02:19 PM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: MarioD]
Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina David Snyder Veteran Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina	Mario, This is country gold. We need to do a co-write. Meet me at Jack's BBQ in ten minutes. Bring your six string. _________________________ David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers Spotify Etc. https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder/songs www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder
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#749008 - 01/12/23 06:26 PM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 04/13/16 Posts: 5280 Loc: Cooran Queensland Australia rayc Veteran Registered: 04/13/16 Posts: 5280 Loc: Cooran Queensland Australia	REALLY cool progressions & structure with a good band. Is whisky really as prevalent in US life as your songs suggest? I loathe the stuff myself and don't know anyone who drinks it other than my old man. It's funny but dangerous, sad but a parody. I assume the almost rhymes are part of the fun too. _________________________ Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
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#749020 - 01/12/23 09:00 PM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 09/27/10 Posts: 5591 Loc: Sacramento, California dcuny Veteran Registered: 09/27/10 Posts: 5591 Loc: Sacramento, California	Was that a song about having one more whiskey or one more song about whiskey? Either way, you had me at the title! Fun write, exactly as promised. You've once again demonstrated the golden rule of sad country songs: when you think you've crossed the line, just keep on walking. Speaking of walking: Next thing I knew I was headed down death row With shackles on my feet so I was walking mighty slow Now that's a lyric! _________________________ -- David Cuny My virtual singer development blog Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?
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#749064 - 01/13/23 10:24 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 11/29/06 Posts: 3188 Loc: Finland jannesan Veteran Registered: 11/29/06 Posts: 3188 Loc: Finland	Very funny, a country parody to be taken seriously, you never fail to surprise. Now I have an urge to write my own whiskey song and somehow make it mightier than yours Janne _________________________ Hear My Music: Soundcloud YouTube
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#749117 - 01/13/23 06:12 PM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 12/08/11 Posts: 7069 Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada Scott C Veteran Registered: 12/08/11 Posts: 7069 Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada	Cool country tune David. Excellent lyric and loved the backtrack. Well done _________________________ Scott Collingwood https://soundcloud.com/scottt709 https://soundcloud.com/spiritlevel-ca
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#749136 - 01/14/23 08:08 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: Guitarhacker]
Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina David Snyder Veteran Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina	Thanks Herb! Yeah, just an natural born optimist man. I may be walking down death row, but at least I have this country song!! _________________________ David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers Spotify Etc. https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder/songs www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder
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#749147 - 01/14/23 09:59 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 04/23/18 Posts: 1586 Loc: Mill Valley, California USA Deej56 Expert Registered: 04/23/18 Posts: 1586 Loc: Mill Valley, California USA	David, Terrific write and a great hook! As ray noted, really cool chord progressions in this and I like the choice of the electric guitars on this production. On the whole, it's a little dark thematically, but a slick listen regardless. Great stuff! All my best to you, Deej
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#749326 - 01/15/23 07:00 PM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: Rob4580]
Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina David Snyder Veteran Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 6866 Loc: North Carolina	Thanks Rob! Can't wait to hear it! _________________________ David Snyder Songwriter/Renaissance Man Studio + Fingers Spotify Etc. https://spoti.fi/359Gigs www.davidsnydermusic.com/ www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder/songs www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel https://www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder
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#749388 - 01/16/23 08:55 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 05/02/14 Posts: 3988 Loc: The Netherlands RnAM Veteran Registered: 05/02/14 Posts: 3988 Loc: The Netherlands	Excellent song David! Especially the chorus, great music there. This is a real "David song". And you sing it very well. Rob and Anne-Marie _________________________ We are Rob Meulman and Anne-Marie Bovenkamp from The Netherlands. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC1gsdNLE7_Gy8qavoOplQow/videos http://rnam.net/
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#749392 - 01/16/23 09:23 AM [User Showcase] Re: ONE MORE WHISKEY SONG_David Snyder [Re: David Snyder]
Registered: 08/10/12 Posts: 10773 Loc: Florida floyd jane Veteran Registered: 08/10/12 Posts: 10773 Loc: Florida	"The warden said the chair is ready and you know it won't be long So before you get that shock Could you sing us one more song" Does it get any better than THAT??? As I said in an earlier thread - I told Bill, when he sent me the lyric - that I've never liked dead-wife songs. Dead-soldier songs are even worse (and then he sent me one of those, too). Fortunately we stopped before doing the dead-dog song. BUT.... I never considered the I-caused-my-girlfriend's-death song. Dark humor runs cold in your veins, son. Excellent modern-Country backing. Love those guitars! An excellent vocal for The Row. Death or Country Music. Y'all ain't right. An we get the rewards from that... Count us Lucky. fj _________________________ 150+ Songs produced using BIAB RealTracks And 50 more... and some more...
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