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Wonderful lyrics, beautiful imagery.
I don't think this song needs such a full production. I appreciate what you did with it, but I feel your backing tracks diminished the essence and beauty of the poetry.
The power of your lyrics and melody with a simple supporting guitar with perhaps a small string quartet backing track would work beautifully.
Either way it's wonderful.
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Dan,
I appreciate the kind words - thanks.
Bob
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Marty,
Thanks - much appreciated.
Bob
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Love that lyric write, Bob.
Maybe a little heavy on the instruments but could be eq'd if you wanted to lighten it a tad.
Thumbs up from me.
Vic
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Bob,
You are deep with lyrical imagination and musical ideas!
This is a wonderful production and performance! I am impressed!
Thanks, TB
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You nailed the Daniel Lanois vibe, Bob. The imagery in your lyric is always so vivid and with this treatment Janice said she feels like the scenes are viewed through a thick mist.  These lines really jumped out at us: “You were looking like a shadow Outside the bedroom door I was dreaming you were flying Like a hawk I watched you soar” Nice dreamy vibe presented with fine vocals and mix! Experimental productions are a bit like stepping off a cliff for us ... you did an excellent job with it. J&B
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David,
Thanks - much appreciated.
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I think this is the first time I've heard this production style; I like it.
Excellent lyrics, per usual. Good melody and expressive vocal.
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James,
Thanks for the kind words.
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Andi,
I appreciate that - thanks.
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Elliott,
Thanks. I appreciate the listen and feedback.
Bob
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Vic,
Much appreciated. Thanks.
Bob
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Bob
That was captivating. Excellent production all round, clever and engaging.
Excellent.
Peter
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Torrey,
I appreciate that - thanks.
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Janice & Bud,
Thanks so much - I appreciate the kind words.
Bob
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Thanks very much.
Bob
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Peter,
Thank you. It is appreciated.
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