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Intro] Nella notte scura, cammino solo
Tra strade deserte e pensieri vuoti
La luna guarda, silenziosa compagna
Nel mio viaggio senza meta e senza scampo

[Strofa 1] Sono un viandante senza meta
Tra le pieghe di questa città
Nessuno mi conosce, nessuno mi aspetta
Sono solo un'ombra nella tempesta

[Strofa 2] Le luci delle case mi sfiorano appena
Come stelle lontane nel firmamento
Mi perdo tra le strade senza fine
E il freddo del vento mi penetra l'anima

[Ritornello] Solitudine, compagna fedele
Nel buio della notte, nel silenzio crudele
Solitudine, amica silenziosa
Che mi accompagna ovunque, senza posa

[Strofa 3] Le voci lontane sembrano sospiri
Nel mio cuore che batte senza ritmo
Mi avvolge il buio, mi avvolge il vuoto
E non trovo conforto in questo deserto

[Ritornello] Solitudine, compagna fedele
Nel labirinto della mente, nell'abisso delle stelle
Solitudine, amica silenziosa
Che mi tiene compagnia, in questa lunga corsa

[Ponte] Ma forse un giorno troverò un rifugio
Dove posare il mio spirito stanco
E lì, tra le braccia di un'altra anima
Scoprirò finalmente il senso della vita

[Ritornello] Solitudine, compagna di viaggio
Che mi ha insegnato a resistere, a non arrendermi mai
Solitudine, dolce compagna
Che mi accompagna nel cammino, fino alla fine. Compagna solitudine

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Ciao Francesco,
Ho ascoltato la tua canzone.
Ci sono alcune cose buone in esso, ma devi ancora migliorarlo.
La canzone è (troppo) lunga, il tuo canto non è così chiaro e non girerei il video così.

Ma questo non rende la canzone 'Lonely Companion' di per sé brutta. Il potenziale di una buona canzone è lì!
Provalo!

In English:
Hi Francesco,
I listened to your song.
There are some good things in it, but you still need to improve it.
The song is (too) long, your singing isn't that clear and I wouldn't shoot the video like that.

But that doesn't make the song 'Lonely Companion' bad in itself. The potential for a good song is there!
Go for that!

Hans


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Grazie mille per il prezioso consiglio, vedrò di lavorarci su. Saluti da Atri (Te) - Abruzzo - Italia

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Francesco, I agree with Hans that there's the core of a good song here. Can't comment on a lot of it, but I really liked the guitar solo. THANKS for contributing!


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Grazie a te!

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