I see you posted when I did.

Here are the points that sound somewhat Dr. Seuss-like:

'Antarticy'
'Squeezy'
'softy softy'
'pinchy'
'tummy'

etc.

In my opinion, there's far too much use of the letter 'y' as a rhyming trick and to convert verbs to adjectives. Here's a suggestion, see if you can turn each line around; put the end at the front, and find other rhymes.

Some tools to go after that are available for free:

1. www.rhymezone.com
2. McGill Rhyming Dictionary (actually go here first). This one is excellent because it includes lines from famous poets utilizing the words you are trying to rhyme. Might as well learn from Keats, Yeats, Blake, Shakespeare etc. while you are at it!

-Scott