Hey jpt,

You know the guy really ought to recall her name if she stayed with him all summer long and gave him her all. No wonder she left. LOL! (Woman's pov.) Seriously, if you change that line your song which is good will be stronger and more appealing to female listeners.

Give her a name - I called her whatever or you could talk about the color of her hair or her eyes there instead of "her name I don't recall." Just my two cents.

Enjoyed the listen. Really nice guitar work too.